New at this
 

New at this


Im not sure i fit in,
I fell like a rabbit in a lions den,
Can i battle the best,
Or will will i be shamefully put to rest,
I dont honestly think so,
But battling the best i dont really know,
So for all the battles that go,
You should not think and just flow!!!

lol dude.................................. it sounds like a poem or some shit to me :S

i just read some of the others my shits lame right now i didnt know what yall were about but i'll keep written Trust me theres more!!

aight, this was waay to short, only 4 bars.

I'm not gonna hate or anything, cos i've been here, everyone has been at this stage, heres some tips to help you:

1.
Choose a subject that you can relate to directly. I speak alot about the troubles over here [N.ireland], i can relate to that directly, so it mkaes it easy to write about, and when i do write about it, it come sout with real passion and feelin'. Thats what you need to do, find something that you have really emotion about and simple write..:)

2.
Increase your vocab. Try to sue at least one descriptive word a line, as you elevate you'll see the importance of it, and it will become easier to accomplish this. But don't go over the top, don't come out with a line like:
These Problematical Rhymes, Burn Intensely Like Precarious Uranium Ores...
The Words Personify My Cavernous Feelings, Indignitly Exposing The Sores... - too much vocab there, keep it simple, yet complex.

3.
Structure out your song, Make it
Verse 1: 10/11 lines
Hook: 4 or 6 lines
Verse 2: 16/18 Lines
Verse 3: 14 lines..
I've got a good tutorial on structure in the tutorial forum.

These ar eonly some simple things to help you elevate, learn about Worpdlay, meta's and Internals etc... Post some topic in the WEC and get some good advice, Keep droppin' them dawg!

Thanks bro

just showing some luv cuz but if what u wrote was the case then..........................lol

yeah i agree, the best way to start is with a jubject, then an easy way is to write the first bar then keep to that structure, just keep practicing...aight..peace

yo u wanna battle shay-d

15 line max

u set it up

and u spit first

iight??