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Feeble Minded (DM) vs Thorn (H.I.V.)
DM vs HIV crew battle.
im not on when you are. i'll just check this out every time i get on, which isnt for long. spit when u have time. ill match. whatever lines u want to put. |
Takin U Out quicker than Petafile Teachers with Students 2 Lunches
Scratch the Minded Gimmic, First Part of your Name Describes Ur Punches (feeble) This kid is like the Ghetto, His Structure is Broke and Poor Now what kind of powerul Mod Erases his Battle Score? Your Intensity ability is smaller than families livin In Shoes This kids punches are about as Consistant as his own Diamond mind Crew Sitting on Santas lap is the Closest this bitch has been to a Hoe Feeble MInded's Avoided this Battle longer Aired Simpson Episodes Im Showin sympothy with this easy written like Retard Arm-Casts Nobody would pay 2 see You Like American Satellite Broad-Casts LIke Kimo theorpy Effecting Hair, In this battle you'll lose the Most Ashamed of complainin 2 spit a deadline so Feeb erased his Posts |
bring troops along, we both proved somethin, this newb is strong
cuz i proved i thought u were good.. and you proved me wrong.. thorn i'd collapse u, & wrap u.. but i'm not sure i really have to.. reverse effect.. im not someone u can laugh at.. but someone laughing at u shutup already! no one wants in your crew.. guess u musta missed that so sorry i didn't diss ya crew..there was no one good to throw a diss at.. make him, sure, ruly.. what?.. & just leave you a whored newbie & i don't need a letter.. to have you merked by.. Yours Truly i train this gnome, sprain his tone... and his betrayal's known u lost to mind.. now theres an excuse why u left ya brain at home.. ya frame is blown, like destroyed pictures, & now stormed behind reppin H.I.V? a corny mind, now thats truly.. a thorn in side.. |
very close battle but FEEBLE took it out the fact that he dissed feebs punches too much it was like punches this punches that..this is a crew battle am i wrong?
and he still doesnt have personals and stuff which is really what i think wins battles This line to me won it for feeble i was literally like ooooo shutup already! no one wants in your crew.. guess u musta missed that so sorry i didn't diss ya crew..there was no one good to throw a diss at.. vote= Feeble Minded..... props to thorn u still did well...jus use more personals next time |
Wow zany your favourite line wasnt even a punch or metaphor
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Wow and I had 4 personals, Lets get sum real voters
Are u even on the Elite battle list wacko? No hate but that was an awful Vote bro |
WOW
Takin U Out quicker than Petafile Teachers with Students 2 Lunches Scratch the Minded Gimmic, First Part of your Name Describes Ur Punches (feeble) This kid is like the Ghetto, His Structure is Broke and Poor Now what kind of powerul Mod Erases his Battle Score? Your Intensity ability is smaller than families livin In Shoes This kids punches are about as Consistant as his own Diamond mind Crew Sitting on Santas lap is the Closest this bitch has been to a Hoe Feeble MInded's Avoided this Battle longer Aired Simpson EpisodesLIke Kimo theorpy Effecting Hair, In this battle you'll lose the Most Ashamed of complainin 2 spit a deadline so Feeb erased his Posts ^All personals and Punches Feeble even you know he voted like a Fool No hate to you tho, nice Flow |
Droppin my two cents on this battle...
And don't bitch, Thorn... I voted for you in a real close battle with Cryptic... I believe ya gave him his first loss in that one. So, don't come at me like ya did Shep, man. Cuz, he's right, ya lost. You took the personals, no doubt. But he cleaned house with his punches, man. They were on target and painful, despite the non-chalant way he spit em. Really, ya were dead after his first bar... bring troops along, we both proved somethin, this newb is strong cuz i proved i thought u were good.. and you proved me wrong.. Vicious, sick "damn" factor on that! Multi's: Feeble Wordplay: Feeble (Thorn had more, but Feeb's was better) Personals: Thorn Metas: Thorn Punches: Feeble "Damn": Feeble |
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No Hate
But where was a Punch In his Verse? HOnestly IM not hating I just dont see any Damn |
punch line n (1921) : the sentence, statement, or phrase that makes the point .
rap definition: punchline : a line standing out in a verse ; a line using comparing something (usually opponent) to something else , using like or as or sometimes other words. e.g : I sunk your game so fast, your like the titanic . |
Exactly Feeb
Didnt see no Like Or As's and thats all I had Correct? _____________________FLat LiNe_________________________ |
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you must have missed that part of it ^ seriously - stop swaying.. no one wants to hear a bitch . fuck. |
Somewhat Close But Feebs Takes This.. And You Are Being A Huge Herb Swayin And Shit. Shit Like That Pisses Me Off..
Anyway Like I Was Saying.. Feeble Really Had Every Important Category. Feeble Had A Great Rhyme Scheme, Thorn Had No Rhyme Scheme At All.. Better Punches By Feeble. Thorn Has The Creativity.. But Came Pretty Played With That Verse. And Using Like And As Means That Your Not Creative Enough To Use It Metaphorically... Which Hits Much Harder Than A Similie... Decent Personals By Thorn, Feeble Had A Few Good Ones, But Your Personals Were Kinda Fake Thorn.. He Didn't Abuse His Mod Powers. He Came With Very Witty And Just Took This Battle... And If You Say Anything To Sway Like That Ever Again I'll Make Sure Feeble Takes You Off That List.. Because Thats Newbie BS.. If You Did That In LLL You'd Get Kicked Off. Consider This Your Warning... Vote- Feeble... |
Vote- Feeble
Reason= Thorn's a bitch for trying to sway like 6 times in this thread..... Fuck that.... accept a loss kiddo. And you wanted to battle me? Damn, good thing I didnt waste a verse. Seriously, Feeble takes this with some witty ass punches The one about the crew was nice. Better and more creative all around Vote-Feeble |
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