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...ILLASTYX --- Vs --- TEK...
10 - 16 lines
No feedin Post by today Bring heat... |
'Before u there were many' better... iv strapped this wit fetters
strapped wit Berettas to leave ur creased frame wetter... Yo illastyx... ur necks stretched drastic... thin like plastic put ur neck in the noose an watch me drop this... Confused? Ur record says nil... but the sig says ur ill who's MCsuperman? You'v yet to prove ur skill... Before u stepped in the thread... ur posts was ate(8) put u to rest in a crate... another wannabe that folded... thas the fate... This fags adamant he hates bitin... now iv gotta believe he hates fightin couldnt handle a short deadline coz he's busy... pre-writing... Its time u were humbled... squashed... like a stress ball pummeled IM SHOUTING... an this fool can only mumble... Jay-Z impersonator? Pathetic... ur no Jay... G ur verse is insomniacs remedy... good for catchin Zee's... |
Thas 14 lines... take ur time writin that verse up.
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wow ya verse was out of control like a car wit no brakes/ you could "steal the win and wouldnt have what it "takes"/
trying to secretly walk away and drop the microphone/ but like houses in tornado's your covers been blown/ kid you gotta wear tube sox to try and fill my shoes/ you like chicago bears defense in a "rush" to lose/ya talk shit but you a bad boy yeah making a band/ like "cheatin in math" to beat me u got a lot of "problems on ya hand"/ why dont you try and role wit nolimit so u can talk about guns and tanks/ cause u couldnt "direct a punch" if u was billy blanks/ you've been beatin and now have ben confinded/ theres "no brain" in ya skull you truly are "absent minded"/ now your done and just not able/ like inviting hadicaps to dinner u aint bring nuthin to the table/ |
Uppin this... well done wit all those original punches...
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okey dokey...
punches=tek...not bad at all personals=tek flow=tek effort=both...the kid did try sustainment=tek overall=tek i was surprisingly impressed by ya verse....very nice MAKE SURE YA HIT THE BATTLE IN MA SIG...IF NOT I WILL KEEP POSTIN...LOL |
Ao... its hit... so bug some other poor guy!
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to my opinion Tek took this, nice style man
really diggin it great flows, good punches and creativity, not bad. The otha kat was kewl though, although I felt that tek's punches came a lil harder and that your verse was kinda basic. vote - tek peace |
this battle goes to tek cuz he had better wordplay and more well thrown punches.....................................
my vote=tek |
flow:tek
Structure: Tek Punchs: Tek Creativity: Tie Enjoyment: Tek Vote: Tek tek came witta real nice verse...Ill's was pretty nice aswell...cudda been layed out better to make it easier to read but he had some good punchs...nice battle |
Good looks... i was feelin this verse as i typed it.
Lookin to finish this... Drop a link if u want me to peep ur battle... . ... ..... ....... ......... ....... ..... ... . |
Ayo... uppn to finish this kid... i need it to close so i can get another battle crackin...
Drop a link an i'll vote... . ... ..... ....... ......... ....... ..... ... . |
Upp... yo c'mon... especially if i voted in ur battle... jus vote.
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tek took this battle...........
he had better flow and punches and everything....... peace out |
i would vote but i dont have 100 posts yet............................................... ...........
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