Im still learning
 

Just read it...i replied to all of yours

I just wanted to be the one who always smiled with pride
I just wanted to be the one who always stopped people cry
I feel so alone inside, My heart just stopped, like it died
No one knows what goes on inside my mind, you're all blind
Cant see all the secrets in my head that i have confined
You can say my life goes in all directions, and i've stepped outta line
I cant say my life is fine, becuz im not the type to lie
If anyone asks what happned to me, just tell them i let my life go by....

I cant make things right, I try my hardest
I just mess things up, like i was retarded
Just look inside, Im not a bad person
Cuz just like any other kid, Im still learning

You expect me to know every little thing that goes on
Im 15 yrs old, i dont know what i do right and do wrong
You are the one who makes me feel like i dont belong
We lasted for long, but you left me, but i still made it strong
Seems like you like to see me struggle, But i can go through it
I made it through this, But you have no hope in me, like i coudlnt do it
Screw it, You never had any faith in me, You could never believe
After all those encouraging words, you just left me with low self esteem
We coulda made it far baby, we coulda been a strong team
But you just let go of things that are too hard and cantbe made easy
Well, No one said it wouldnt be hard, so i guess u cant kick it wit me.....

I cant make things right, I try my hardest
I just mess things up, like i was retarded
Just look inside, Im not a bad person
Cuz just like any other kid, Im still learning

I cant make things right, I try my hardest
I just mess things up, like i was retarded
Just look inside, Im not a bad person
Cuz just like any other kid, Im still learning


Im not sayin that im mad at ya for the things you do
But you didnt have to go so far as in sayin "i love you"
You broke my heart, Left my peices unglued
I was left in two, I couldnt picture me without you
Not that it matter, cuz its all cool, im makin it through
I can do things on my own, bet you didnt know that
Thinkin im stupid, im glad i never had yo back
I say things in facts, and im tellin ya, i never loved you back
you go off sayin i act like im 2,you gotta go low, why you like that?
I like to live a simple life, make people happy to be alive
But you come along, teach me how to solve problems with a knife
I never did that shit, till you entered upon my life
We was never tight, We'll never make it in life together
Those words were so fake, "i could live with you forever"..

I cant make things right, I try my hardest
I just mess things up, like i was retarded
Just look inside, Im not a bad person
Cuz just like any other kid, Im still learning

that was ill poetic but at first i thought u were just talking about u and how u felt then u flipped and got soft on some love shit its kool though everyone goes through it-"ONE"

Yup, exactly....
Thats how i watned it....talkin bout my self...and then about one person....not true, just made up...

thanks for the reply

lookin for replies.....

this felt like it was a pretty deep peice that you put emotion into, you kept to the subject well, but i thought it was a bit depressin, i didn't like the hook much but it linked in well with the topic, quite a simple structure but it suited it,but i would have introduced some good multis but all in all pretty decent ......

can you hit this quick drop up plz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88550

that was a great read, very emotionsl, i liked how you started and got more indepth...very creative...i thought this was one of those peiaces u were gunna write about elavation...but u reallt came across ill...great read..peace

it's pretty cool. good beat, easy read. keep your spirits up kid