Burnen M.c.'s
 

Im a gargantuin with a pediatric doctren to moch men-
NONCENTZ IS THE HUMAN FIRE HYDREN….
Flows Douce these lames weak flames.
Im better weather in period or hyphen-
I Slip sleepers vivrin-mix grapplen and battlen… prescriben
ass whippings for medicine then charge you ludacris styphens.
Before you battle me,
write your last will and testaments offer repentence …
say your amens-
pump 2000 grams of ephedrine into your adrenaline.
The only fates warning offered is DON’T BATTLE HIM.
What you think im just talking shit?
My fan basis is aids patients cause they relate to being this sick..
I’ll rip you….
rip jaws and leave your brain puzzled like jigsaws.
my win percentage has no loss….. there’s no flaws-
your not my equal…my shits like porn sequal-there’s no draws.
Who ever step in the ring make they peace with god-
Im a kamikozze in times of war like the jighad.
Recieven terrorist fan letters by the bundles in heaps-
saying my cd is the only way to buy napalm that cheap.
Think about it…. 15.99 to insinerate beaf-
Without receiving a police charge or being caught with heat.
I make the block hot My acapells bring hell to the street-
Purgatory to soundwaves
-warfare to m.c’s., welfare to their dj’s.
Simple and plain I spit riddles insain-
The only hot thing that ever came from your brain –
Was a micheal Jackson topay complete with the flames.
You aint even got a faint chance at beating me
But you will catch a concussion.
Fucking with someone this raw,is like the threat of aids
Not worth the rupuctions.-
bumrushen – blitzkrieg like pryromaniac russians-
After experiencing the heat from the rhymes im busten.
You’d think combustion was the topic of discussion.

ill drop man, very extensive use of vocab....tight flow

"Recieven terrorist fan letters by the bundles in heaps-
saying my cd is the only way to buy napalm that cheap."

^^nice as fuck......
you got some good lines........keep em comin.......peace

nice drop son, flow was nice, vocab was good as usual...content was good...lot of nice wordplay....overall it was a dope drop with alot of nice lines...keep dropping kid...

Im a gargantuin with a pediatric doctren to moch men

nice way to open up^

What you think im just talking shit?
My fan basis is aids patients cause they relate to being this sick..

haha that was nice^


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THANK YOU BUT I CANT HELP BUT FEEL FORGOTTEN HERE

that shit was tight too, i like the "fan basis is aids patients"line

thanks atleast i have readers

UPPIN

hot, you had a good flow and good wordplay man, i was really feelin this piece, you comen wit some dope ass multies an shit man keep er up, peace

wat up BLOOD!!! that was sizzling still... showing u a veteren i gotta expect that already from ya, KEEP HOLDING IT DOWN TOUGH

nice shit

flows good n you gotta nice vocab on you..makes for a nicer read than these 1 sylabal raps..

had some real nice lines in there

Nice wordplay I was feeling it..flow wasn't bad...multis can always use work no matter how good you are..all will come with time..aight Peace