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DiverseSyndicate 10-30-03 05:07 PM

very short,no topic and unfinished,tell me what yall think.
 
my style drops on beats like rain drops drop on feet, defeat after you retreat, delete after you repeat, concieve what i can teach, while i reach from drugs from streets//

poetic,you hoes dont get-it, i dont let-it bother me so just forget-it, broken homes comes to broken bones so set-it, dry pussies hard to slide in so just wet-it//

bet-it didnt occur-to-you, that id have you turnin-blue, my words so hot ink boils on paper burnin-through, tryin to solve unsolved mysteries earnin-clues//

you never learnin-dude, crude spits rip through strips,of paper like clips when my bullets-blitz, you faggots full-of-shit, im pullin-grips ice be coolin-lips//

pullin-sips from a glass of cryst...

e.coli 10-30-03 05:34 PM

this was alright u had a nice lil rhyme scheme going there.........when are u going to drop the rest of it???


nice, short drop playa

Da_Killa_Kid 10-30-03 05:38 PM

NIce. that shit was on point dog. finished or not u did your thing. Good lookin on the post .

HOLLA AT DA KID

DiverseSyndicate 10-31-03 12:16 PM

i appreciate tha replies ill probably drop tha rest when i get off work today.~1~


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