a lil sum'n
 

this shit aint luck this shit is destiny//
i got dat touch plus da recipe//
a dutch plus da best of weed, brings out da best in me//
ya'll desperately hop cock tryna ride on my dick//
but first u need a permit//
and then imma let da sperm drip str8 off ya lip//
words dat i spit is all ripped up uniquelly//
ya'll actors aint a factor wut makes u think u can beat me//
i'll eat theee alive you guys is all bitch//
cuz i can fuck u up and leave dat asshole stiched//
rip u down till u look like confedee//
ask around its obvious ya dudes wasn't ready//
machede with the chainsaw flow//
cuz i cut the track like my brains on blow//
stains on clothes like Tony Montana in the bathtub//
bring it from the bottom to bitches givin me back rubs//
thats thug plus im that ghetto nigga from v-town//
throw up the first shot and catch my own rebound//
i see clowns far from the circus//
clame to be down but wen beefs round a bitch comes to the surface//
niggas is nervous, im all bout balls of steel//
cuz everyday i pray like its my last meal//
cuz everyday i prey on niggas dats not real//
talk about heat wen niggas aint got steel//
the fact is shits a classic wen ever i speak//
cuz i can drop hot shit from both of my cheeks//
rest at the peak of rap cuz im known to be sick//
where as ya'll like daireah from the mouth, all u do is talk shit//
i walk it so i can gain my respect//
why hitchu wit a pitsol wen i can kill u wit text//
im smart about my ways how i keep shit on the low//
cuz quiet niggas kill and loud niggas talk shit about shit they don't know//
thats that dumbness quick to make ya feel da numbness//
body on the ground with no head to be found u dumb bitch...

None of the concepts expressed in the piece were really outstanding, but the use of a good flow and many multis helped your overall verse. lol @ Tonya Montana line, got a slight smile out of me. . This was alright, just try to get more creative with your ideas, and keep writing.