in the killing zone
 

i don't know what to do with this life of mine
because being picked on is just not fine
help me, i need my life line
don't hang up or shatter my spine
you talked behind my back all the time
fuck, you're not my friend and that is fine
shit, tommorrow, i'll get a new friend
guy or girl, whatever, it's time to spend
maybe there's someone you can lend
and i give that person back or i'll pretend
that i lost him or her at that show we did attend
but i'll pay you back, nope dead end
i'm bullied at school everyday
they choose me to be the prey
and in the thrid grade i was never invited to play
or to get my picture taken in santa's sleigh
i'm like a fucking cat that is astray
and my life is a cliche
someone do something about it
or i'll kill myself like my friend did it.

I hope this is venting, but it seems like a cry for help.... if it is, get some.

don't take lyrics so seriously

yo nigga overall this was a good drop, vocab was average flow was good, concept was good, a nice drop.

check this out and drop some feed back on it plz, thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7212#post877212

Jyeh nice flow and vocab was aight. Keep it up