Three minds combined.. Ft. Ayura&Potent
 

Three minds combined..
This is what u get when u take three people, and let them write whats on their mind..

Three different minds, feelins but skilled combined.
Three minds combined aligned to the planets lined,

.:Potent:.
.:Sharin with u a piece of my mind:.
When my heads clouded with thoughts i'm brought. .
Down to the ground & have fought my own fought
Views distorted so feuds aborted to to get sorted
Reps reported by all which makes me feel deported
Is my rep me? Things seem to get fucked so easily
Throats choking with grey moods seeming feasibly
Breezily bound through mounds of shit thats sits. .
& insists to persist to make me feel less like a man
Then grip my grits just so nothing shifts to demands
Thoughts clammed up with sex so I need to cool off
My balls end up around my neck & my cools lost

Then school the lot that forgot my heated potential

.:Ayura:.
.:Fanstasy as a passion:.
I close my eye's and im blown to the height of the skies
Like smoke, My throat's rise above cloud nine
Close two, expose's the third eye, mind aerodynamics
My sun flies my rays, and leaves the moonlight shattered
And its a spoonfight matter, trying to bend around the wall
Trying to jump the fence with force, to catch the golden ball
Withing the all, I like think myself as the phantom author
Standing taller, shoulder's broader as my voice calls her
Forever chasing the unicorn, racing reborn on the steed
I fall into darkness, the light leads me to merge as 3

Iite yall ready?...Beat-change...

.:Edicius:.
.:Shoutin out!!!!:.
U think u got it all and you actin big&tough,
are u forgettin the big picture?,
You just dont open your eyes wide enough!.

.:This is on my mind now, one desire:.
Didnt hope this would happen at the beginnin.
My heads a big carrousel of memories spinnin,
Seems i cant put this damn puzzle back apart,
wonderin y is it so hard to feel like at the start.
Tell me from here what am i suposed to do?,
not bein this clumsy fuck up im turning in to.
Why cant i put this pain into a kinda mute,
the confusin horror of this fucked up truth.
Remember all them songs and the way we used to laugh,
but the future got my worried of these awful thoughts.
Were do we go? what does it bring from here?,
nights long and so damn dark filled up with fear?
U said u would never leave me,feels like wow,
but i needed u & where the fuck are you now!??.
If i knew i could work on bein prepared...,
..but i cant skill less as a changer,
so here presented by me!,
this piece of writtin produced out of failure!.

Cant believe people are sleeping on this

And thats werd^^

yep

very good piece all of u had great detail and thoughts, all of u had nothing to critique...fo real perfect piece u 3 ltes

IITe nominee for the open mic thing then lol^^


Thnx for the feed..

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Way To Rep Pot1ent/Edicus

Hook - Whoever Wrote That, It Was Sick
Was Feelin The Flow n' Vibe Of It

Pot1ent - Good Shit From You As I've Come
To Expect. Material Was Deep And To The Point
And Your Flow In This Piece Was Incredible

Ayura - Like Pot1ent, Ya Flow Was Great..
Material Wasn't As Deep, But Definitly In Depth
None The Less. Vocabulary Was Expanded
In Your Piece, Which Shined Throughout

Edicus - Didnt Match The Flow Of Ayura And
Pot1ents, But Ya Depth Took Over In This Piece.
Really nice Insight.. Was Feeling It

Overall - Great Piece. Legendary, No. (:))

^lol lol lol


Thnx for the feed apreciated^

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Strengths: The whole god damn thing. The flow was really really good, it have a really nice vibe to it, like whatever.

Weaknesses-Some of you lacked a little deepness in some areas, but other then that it was really good flow all around. Flow was broken by Edicus, though it was deeper then the others.

Overal-Extremly good peice, just keep producing more good ideas like this.

Nah not broken , it better on audio i think...thnx for the feed back

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I'm feeling you guys (whatever your sex)
Liked al 3 peices... Edicius of all was the odd one out in a unique sort of way... but for some reason I feel you lot did'nt put as much effort as you could have done into it (compared to all your solo work) Still worth reading... werd