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Thorn VS Dacurse
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...been a long time coming...
...so here we go... ...whose heard of dis fag...rhymes lack complexity like third grader math... ...I’ll murder dis trash...then use his shitty spits to help fertile my grass... ...he’s gettin suspended...only seen as equal by the first amendment... ...His guards up...but like felons wit no lawyer Thorn just cant defend this... ...I’ll snatch ya lungs make sure you have no upliftin voice to rejoice wit... ...u spit like teachers from Charlie Brown...rhymes is simply just noise kid... ...u need to clean up your Act like plays written on dirty dishes... ...neva had a chance in this battle like a still borns existence... ...his personality is multiple...wit secret identities like superman... ...following Brooklyns path which means I can foresee a future ban... ...be glad u made da list...but not worthy of my collection of greatest hits... ...a no show from Thorn wont surprise me he’ll just send his favorite alias... Spit whenever... No feedin... No herb newbish one line votes please... |
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Like that Style and Structure, Now your Dun
U cant cut it so fuck Wishin, Learned you In I'm Just Fishen Dishen you English That'll Drown you like University Tuition Still Newbish, This kids Quality's a Satellite in Storm-Dish Heats Extinguished, Couldnt Devour Me as Hoast in a Church Pe-Rish Enjoyin Myself Playing with this Fool, It's Like Im out to Recess Curse's Verses R surrounded by ... ... ,This kid Seems Speechless Take Hits in all Directions like Bongs, Get off JZ's Balls and Songs Wouldnt be able to Toss me If I Politely Passed the Salad Tongs Ur Invisible, An Obese Thong, Ya Ashes like Molten Valcanic Puttin U 2 Sleep so Fast, you'd think There was a Sheep Panic Gayer than Students in Fashion, My Passions to Simply Kill Fucked U Up like Dialated Pupils, Couldnt Controll me On the Pill About to Lose to Me Again, For Him theres no Feeling Worse It Begs Me to Ask the Question....Is Da really Under a Curse? Vote |
Flow - Thorn
Punches - Thorn Personals - Both Multis - Thorn Meta4s - Curse Wordplay - Both Originality - Both Structure - Both Vote = Thorn Close battle... Thorns flow was on point an feelin them punches... good battlin fellas. Peep this an vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89003 I took the time... so should u. |
very nice battle
flow=tie.....both flowed well punches=thorn creativity=tie structure=tie wordplay=da curse finisher=thorn very nice, close battle my vote=thorn.................no hate curse holla |
L's breakdown:
punches - Thorn flow - Thorn creativity - Curse personals - Thorn opener - Curse closer - Thorn Overall - Thorn. Can you guys drop an honest vote on this since I dropped an honest vote on this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88993 |
Dacurse-
...whose heard of dis fag...rhymes lack complexity like third grader math... ...I’ll murder dis trash...then use his shitty spits to help fertile my grass... ^^this was aight...but the rest of your vere was weak...lots of played rhymes and such.... Thorn- U cant cut it so fuck Wishin, Learned you In I'm Just Fishen Dishen you English That'll Drown you like University Tuition ^^nice multis......mediocre punch... Enjoyin Myself Playing with this Fool, It's Like Im out to Recess Curse's Verses R surrounded by ... ... ,This kid Seems Speechless ^^best bar of the battle hands down... Overall-thorn took this simply cuz of more originality.......came less played and had more personals.....the ... line that I quoted was nice as hell....but props to both... Vote=thorn |
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i thought this wuz a close bttle
flow-curse punchs-thorn personals-thorn creativy-curse werdplay-thorn OVERALL-thorn (he edged curse by a small fraction) [B]PLZ VOTE ON THIS LINK...[B] http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88962 |
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