verbs vs. syted
 

I'll just use the same rules from your other post with the ausrotten guy:


10 lines
no hate/crew votes
no feeding
due a.s.a.p.
ya' dig......



this is my check in too.

Aiight I'm Here...I'm Writin Right Now....

The ~Best? Your Not~ Couldn't Have 'God Writes' If I ~Blessed Your Font~ I'll 'Cook And Serve' Your Uncles Wife And ~REST-UR-AUNT- (restauraunt)

I'll Slice You Open And ~Bleed You~ Your Important?? Take Ya Face To My Knee Is The Only Time Anyone Has Ever "~Kneeded You~" (Kneed-Need)

My Words Will Tense Up Your Muscles So It ~Holds ya Breath~ Write 'Dead' On My Outfit And Even Then You Still Couldn't Get Me ~Clothes To Death~ (Clothes-Close) Battlin' Pus8ys Like You Then I'll ~Win A Few~ I Got Bullets That Remind Me Of Fablous Cause They'll Love To Be So ~Into You~

This Dudes The Type To ~Stare At A Thin Fag~ I'll Beat You Red N' Blue And Leave You So Pale, Lookin' Like A Dismentaled ~American Flag~

your name is oversyted, wackness couldn't reach me, I cloud your iris/
your naked verses scream for closure(clothes), so I do the impossible, like Iraqi's silence/
must be double-vision? seeing no potential but potential minus, the plastic virus/
shutsdown syteds immune record(0-0), from what seems two zeros to a closed eyelid(0-1)/
resentul defiance, forcefully pilling rhyming, his punches play hero, til' I kill his sidekick/
murdered in front of the whole RB, I'm the inventor of distracting violence/
quick to step up and lose? must be fast with kindness/
strike a match a behind him....I'll probably flame it/
this fag is burning, throw punches? like his potty training never learned to aim it/
ya' rhymes is still all buttcheek, even if you took time to write it cause your an anus/

***correction**

sorry the immune line was supposed to say "see-thru" instead of "immune", my bad.


I see that syted had a "clothes" line too, trust me I didn't feed or bite it's merely coincedence, I just noticed it.

Uppin This Shit...LEts Get Sum Votes In Here....I Don't Want This To Be On The 2nd Page And This To Get Over Wit....UPPIN!!!

umm sy some of your puches jus dident make too much sense??
the one wit the Aunt was horribal.......

verbs i wasent feelin your verse either...
had some good wordplay.. but room for improvemnt..

youll need to put thought to your punches...

but good battle.. evenly matched..

vote: Sy

keep elavating

vote- syted..
punches were easier to grasp...
the other kids a few were played, wellk a few for [both were.. but.. syteds punches hit harder and were a little easier to read.
syted.. switch to a style without all the !~~~~ its gay as fuck.

meh- what the fuck.. i just realized theres no poll = closed.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@