LM vs Split-eyez (round II)
 

10-15lines
No d/r and all that
No show after check in results in d/q
Blind spit
No time limit


Check in dawg!

aight checkin innnnn

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Alright look....I merked you the first time and I'm a do it again/
Your usin pre-written shit....dawg be a man and put down that pen/
You sayin your second wins comin soon....just tell us when/
Dawg we'll throw a party and invite all your favourite men/ (gay joke)
We'll start plannin now for 2010....hire a mansion on top of a hill/
You lack skill but your convinced that your ill/
Actually thats true coz you took an overdose of whack pills/
This is gon' be your 14th loss, it'll be the death of you....I'll even help you write your will/
It'll say 'LM did this kill so everythin goes to L'/
Your played lines, your broken mic and your girl aswell/
Dawg you've stepped up in battles and fell so many times your one of a kind/
It's coz your verses are like a fire....when seen, people run for the exit signs/
Dawg if your brain was elastic you couldn't stretch or expand your mind/
Born Sept1985, kicked out the house for takin your dad from behind/ (gay joke + personal)
So if you ever come to the UK make sure you let me know so I can go and hide/

Peace!!!
Good luck in the votes

Illness to-fill-this- text with expensive raps that Clinton couldn’t even ‘Bill’ this
But feel-this-realness… ya raps are cheap and poor like a ‘Drug Lord’ that was Deal-Less

After this, you need to acknowledge me –with an apology
With you, there’s – no lamer – smash ya mind outta ya skull, that’s why beatin you is a –no brainer-

LM is rockin a dick that’s lingering-limp when he fucks
Even if ya switched to fingering ya still couldn’t get 2 tumbs up

Like Clueless Gurls, sending their Daddy’s credit cards into debt…
I’ve punched this kid harder as my bar ‘lengths against Whonext have Stretched
(bar length – daddy’s anger)

My volts enter skin and my shocks annoy pours , dawg ur style aint gay, but you are so stop puttin ur pe-pe
in boy whores
this dude a thug? HA…. the only blocks u run , come with their own box in toystores

Kid I'll turn this rap into a G-rated movie… better yet a Nickelodeon's show "you pick"
This hoe’s so dumb he thought the crip walk was a motion picture flick

FINISHER:

This battle’s like a concert wit no exits u just stuck in the show,.. this is rape the way i'm verbally fukkin this ho
I don't de-feet quickly,.. I take smoke breaks while cuttin your toes , my punches like organized people,
but u, u just couldnt keep ur ducks in a row

aight... let the votin beginn

UPPINNNNNN'
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LM, GOT THIS SHIT THOUGH, IM HOLLA BACK CUZ IM HUNGRY
AS HELL......FO' A BATTLE IM SETTIN UP RIGHT NOW

AIGHT LM ~ONE~

1) It aint 1-0 to me coz you can't poll...thanks for the comment tho.
2) What the fuck you settin up.

WHOA !whoa!damn my bad i mistakin split eyez won this dawg
for my opinion. that shit wuz tight nigga. LAUGH OUT LOUD!
THAT SHIT WAS FUNNY.

~ONE~

^^ thx
appreciate it
uppin... wonna get some votes up here

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Do yourself a favour and shoot yourself

You both posted 2 dope verses, different styles and different approach on things, but to be totally honest, LM came out marginally stronger.

Split, you had a good verse, but i think LM just came out a little stronger. LM however, up your rhymin abilities, the rhymes were a little simplistic...

Vote LM

Flow: S
Punchs: Tie (LM's were played...Splits wernt to strong)
Creativity: Tie
Meta's: LM
Enjoyment: LM

Vote: LM

this was a pretty damn close battle...hard to vote on...Split id consider changing your structure cus people on this board prefer smaller lines with punchs n meta's...good battle tho..LM took it...just

^^ yo man, I don't know what's up with my record,
it's just that I've recently changed styles but people aren't really diggin it
but hey, that's kewl... as long as I get to do mah shit it's all good

thanks fo honest comments

Flow - LM
Multies - Split-eyez
Opener - Split-eyez
Finisher - tie
Structure - LM
Wordplay - neither
Originality - Split-eyez
Personals - LM
Enjoyment - tie
Vocabulary - neither
Metaphores - LM
Punch Lines - Split-eyez
Rhyme Scheme - LM

Overall - LM; 5-4

^Close battle y'all