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Thorn VS ~D~Abyss~ (lmao)
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Flyweight..Ya quicker than paper aeroplane kits to reach ya fold
Ya unshaven N confused usin 'Which' craft to penetrate me wit holes Like faulty clippers ya aint makin the grade or passin this year My shots hit ya till ya writin fo help why ya verse'l start wit oh 'Dear' fools only battlin wit 'Rooks' cus he aint 'checked' out the 'board' N this Gaint aint makin the fourth quater why im gettin the fours Kid calls himself ill but werent ya rejected by Aid's? Ya droppin like tetris..its why ya lines'l always be played Like generous laundrettes ya quick to throw in the towel Ya spittin straight shit cus ya verse cum's from ya bowels Explanations: -Rook = chees peice -Giants keep loasin in the 4th quater..my rec'l b 4-4 after this -He left H.I.V (crew)..aid = help for ill people |
Im Predictin There will be Pain Inflictin on this Infectious Marijuana Smoker
Causing you to hit Rock Bottom You'd think U failed as a Stock Broker (Suicide) Abusin and Bruisin this kid, Forshadowin this Battle would only be an Illusion Performing GangBangs Over Webcam's what he means by WorldWide Fusion (Sig) U'll be Drowned with Frouns and your Self Esteem Will Under go a Sinkage I'll Cool Off D Abyss's Verses Problems, Its like he's Facin Shrinkage Ya nuthin like Haiwai On an Atlas, No crew cuz Ya Worthless Named himself A-Byss cuz Its Very Easy to Crack his Surface Fed up wit Ya Fake Personals, Wasnt Rejected but Quit Aids And Actin out My Defete Would Only Result In Chirades Fool I wasnt Rejected by H.I.V lmao Votes................. |
~D~Abyss~
I Called u Out..... Aight This Is Honest Voting Here... Flyweight..Ya quicker than paper aeroplane kits to reach ya fold Ya unshaven N confused usin 'Which' craft to penetrate me wit holes ^^^ That Was Actually Pretty Funny!~ Like faulty clippers ya aint makin the grade or passin this year My shots hit ya till ya writin fo help why ya verse'l start wit oh 'Dear' ^^ Sounds Like You A Granny (not cool LoL) fools only battlin wit 'Rooks' cus he aint 'checked' out the 'board' N this Gaint aint makin the fourth quater why im gettin the fours ^ I Dont Get That :(? Kid calls himself ill but werent ya rejected by Aid's? Ya droppin like tetris..its why ya lines'l always be played ^ Not true Like generous laundrettes ya quick to throw in the towel Ya spittin straight shit cus ya verse cum's from ya bowels ^^^^^ OHHH Good One! Verse Rating= 6.5/10 .................................................. .................................................. ..... Thorn Im Predictin There will be Pain Inflictin on this Infectious Marijuana Smoker Causing you to hit Rock Bottom You'd think U failed as a Stock Broker (Suicide) ^^ Mad multis Right Tere I Like Dat Abusin and Bruisin this kid, Forshadowin this Battle would only be an Illusion Performing GangBangs Over Webcam's what he means by WorldWide Fusion (Sig) ^^ LMAO OHHHHHHHHHHH U'll be Drowned with Frouns and your Self Esteem Will Under go a Sinkage I'll Cool Off D Abyss's Verses Problems, Its like he's Facin Shrinkage ^^ Good Wordplay Right Thurr Ya nuthin like Haiwai On an Atlas, No crew cuz Ya Worthless Named himself A-Byss cuz Its Very Easy to Crack his Surface ^^ Gettin A Lil Geographic Here Fed up wit Ya Fake Personals, Wasnt Rejected but Quit Aids And Actin out My Defete Would Only Result In Chirades ^^ Thats A Wrap (good mayne) verse rating= 8/10 .................................................. .................................................. ..... ~D~Abyss~ You wasnt so bad , you just need to elevate and drop in more multis and wordplay Not Much of A Battle.. But I Had Fun Readin LOL vote= THORN |
Thorn definately took this battle.... he had better punches, more multis, a better flow, more wordplay, and umm yah... merkage.. lol
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Oops I meant to post this too.... please hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=88877 |
this was a complete merking thorn had better punches wordplay creativity and complexity........................my vote=thorn
hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8909#post878909 |
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this time i poll voted thorn................just thought i would mention that since u only have 2 votes but 3 people said u won.............
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I didnt poll vote, it doesnt let me but if you pm a mod they can add it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=88877 |
Flow-Thorn
Metas-tie personals-Thorn vocab-Thorn structure-tie Thorn was better in every area. D-abyss had a couple good lines but it wasn't hard enough. More offensive metaphores, hit harder. |
thorn got this wit multi's and word play everything else was too close to judg both had some decent punches I really like'd the aids line but then he flipped it pretty good to anyways this was a good battle
hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88771 |
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