dom-N8 v.s. Forshadower
 

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due at 6 pm eastern, if you miss deadline by a couple of minutes its cool, but don't post too late....

no bullshit votes

how longs that from now forshadower, I'm in a different time zone.............................................. .........................................?

in half an hour from no roughly...
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you can take an hour if you want...up to you...

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if you do not get something, do not vote

You beating the unbeatable is a hyperbole...da kind to 'spit' elevated action 'high verb_ally'/
I'll take you to rhyme in Harlem just so you can spit at me 'Apollo_getically'!/
U winning? highly unlikely...you're wack....even your lyrics told me/
Face it, you couldn't even be a graphic rappa if you wrote ya shit in Adobe!/
I'ma put this joke under more heat than Nyphomaniac_Dog_Breeders..
Then steal ya life like Kleptomaniac_Palm_Readers!
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6 lines doubt that I'll need any more...good luck

Yo look,

My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset,
Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/
You’re like a kamikaze pilot you go to battle & end up dead wiv my verbal shrapnel in ya head,
Ya need a ‘lyric-proof-vest’ to stop you from lying in a liquid that’s red soaking the sheets of ya death bed/
I’m just sparring, this ‘shadow boxing’ is too easy cos I punch hard but the ‘forshadower’ never hits back,
Feel the cold as ya record goes below zero, you tried, you froze comments on ya rhyme will mainly read ‘wack’/
Ya verses are so rough & incomprehensible - shit I thought I was reading Braille,
Blind men voting is ya only hope of winning this, I’m hittin ya like a wife beater hits a female/
I took this forshadower ‘bitch n slapped’ her on the the ‘front lines’ for the whole world wide web to see,
When ya peeps ask ya about this battle you tell them - ‘'I got ‘dom-N8’d’ & merked embarrassingly’’/

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hmm....I underestimated you a bit........but w/e vote honestly folks.......
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yo i think dom won that battle

cant vote just free postin this shit

check out my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rhythm

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this battle was pretty even in my opinon..............but domin8s wordplay put him on top of this battle......................my vote=domn8.............no hate foreshadower u had a good verse too but it just wasnt enough

Hmmmm

Punches.........rappad
Flow...............rappd
Structure........Niether
Personal.........Dom
Similes............rappad
Comparisons....Rappad
Vocabulary........rappad
creativity...........rappad
vote................rappad

D's verse seemedc played and basic, no hate juststatin the truth

Thorn why you talkin bout 'rappad' he aint even in this battle????

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mods this poll is fucked up, i got 2 votes for me & 1 against me for someone who aint even in this battle. My score's been altered from 2-0 to 1-1????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????/

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