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Freestyle
Yo this is just gonna be spit however so i dont even know yet
Here we go Yo I take kindness as weakness cuz mc's afraid of me I'll leave um bloody with my macheti, hang um in a tree I kill people with only the unique words that i speak When people lookin for talent its the Kemy$t that they seek Cuz I flow harder then lava pouring from a burning volcano When I battling kats all you hear is laughter and OOOOHH Cuz my punchlined rhymes hit harder then Roy Jones When request lines come up, people pickin up their phones Requestin rhymes of Kemy$try that come from my pad Anybody wanna come w/ me, fukk u its too bad Aint nobody ever rolled with me so I say fukk u all Cuz before u fags started walkin, u had to learn to crawl U think your something better then me then we'll see Cuz i'll be making 20 bones per album while u sellin um for free Not me i'll be all over everywhere and then u'll finally believe Cuz the crazyness that flows from my mouth u couldnt conceive U think its make believe cuz people aint sposed to flow like this Well bitch it don't matter whether im writing or puttin um in a dis Cuz my flow is untouchable for anybody to try to copy And when you try to battle, bitch u can't stop me I'm taking over like I've said before so u need to finally listen I won't have to talk about my money and jewels, but u'll kno i glisten Give me some feedback thanx -KeMy$t |
this was a nice flow for a keystyle..............u had good rhyme scheme and a lil bit of wordplay in there as well
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thanx for the feedback other peeps hit this shit up aight peace
-Kemy$t |
Cuz i'll be making 20 bones per album while u sellin um for free
^ my first read thru, and sorry dawg thats giving em away but its aight... right right, nice lul keystyle from a cat... you could elevate somewhere from here.... u came solid...in that it rhymed and u had some okay stuff, that roy jones thing is played as well as the ohhhh but u had them...in semi original locations.... Cuz before u fags started walkin, u had to learn to crawl ^playedness.... improve on this: vocab... thats really what i want, and some metas and shit... u did good, this was a aight, for the circumstance... keep dropping and going up and shit... ~1~ |
thanx for the feedback i spit this shit in like less than 5 minutes so it was basically just comin to me as i was writin it so it prolly aint the hottest shit ever but ya kno gotta spit some shit sometimes more feedback tho i really appreciate this shit so i can elevate and make somethin of myself aight peace
-KeMy$t |
i hadn't read the rules yet so i just gave feedback to KFC, wordperfect, and salttheking aight thats all
-KeMy$t |
yo dawg some tight shit in dat i liked it aiight good word play and Shit and som nycew shit 4 a KeyStyle
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Re: Freestyle
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CUZ your the sorriest cat i now on this peace of shit
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wat the fukk are u talkin about get outta my rhyme thread aight peace
yo hit this up w/ some votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0879#post880879 |
aight peeps id like some more feedback and i need to get some honest votes on this battle thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0879#post880879 |
DONT SWET THAT CUZZO I LIKE YOUR RHYMES AND WHAT YOU DISPLAY HERE
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thanx man i appreciate that more responses please
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uppin
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