Nitemarre .VS PAK N. HEat
 

10-lines max
5 bars
2 lines a bar
blah blah blah//
blah blah blah// 2 lines=1 bar

checkin before spittin we both get an start after u checkin
30 minutes
no dring votes
an so on

Pc

checkin in dawg....
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You could be in a graveyard at night and wouldn't be scarry/
You a flyweight that dont fly straight to me fag, you a fairy//
Im a "King" kinda like Larry, get nailed up so you hang/
DVG in yo sig, oh not the dickless virgin gang!//
My flames gonna get flung from this gun, you should run/
Oh so you "Pak N. Heat" then Im Pak N The Fuckin Sun//
I could say "vote for him" and yo chance of winnin decreases/
Life signs all ceases, I couldn't "help" if I was "Jesus!"//
When you rhyme, its like you stood in line you should take a seat/
Yo put some fusion in pocket, and still wont Pak E-Nuff Heat///

^^Hmm coo shit...
FAKe persONALs

Bunch of played punches....but nun the less good shit for being 1-3


Yo......
Aite....


Ya entered the battle thinkin you'd dispose of-me but chose to-be ripped-fast//
supposedly ya got-skill,I'm not-thrilled,I drop-ill and give ya whip-lash//
decapitate ya bitch-ass,once I dispatch my Concepts and leave ya lid-wisted//
this kid in-sisted to get verbally-fisted,ya shoulda just bit the shit that Chrit-did//
ya had one shot but missed-it,now ya listed as another victim of my viscious-blows//
I'm so-fuckin-cold my-lines'll paralyze ya-mind and leave this bitches-wishes-froze//
with descriptive-flows,its my mission,to cause a collision and seperate ya neck-and-head//
super imposin-this-foe,show em I'm the best,and disconnect his intellect-instead//
collect-ya-dreads,once I peel ya cap-back so far that it reveals ya-spine//
leavin a trail of weak emcees,when I proceed to-rhyme it's like I'm sqeezin a 9//



Uppin for sum honest votes......nice

aight yo

flow=pakn
punches=nite
structure=nite
creativity=pakn
wordplay=pakn
overall=pakn

close battle but i think pakn took this he came with sum good multi's and disses, while nite had sum simple shit but one good line and he played off his name too much.

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thanks for the feedback lookin for sumone else to
hit it up wit a honest vote for me pcccccccccccccccccccccccccc

pakn all da way yall.............................................. .................................................. .........

thanks alot man upiin for honest vote.s......................................

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<<< getting banned for freeposting, this vote was a hate vote and doesnt count............................................. .........................................

Biddy? are u fuckin blind? first off ya dun't vote by dissin who just battled first it's too obvious that u pullin u'r vote outa ya ass----soooo in all honesty ya need to talk to jack and the beanstaulk and stop hatin cuz u a liein hoe just gotta elevate a little dawg---keep it real--peace

UPPIN I NEED A MODS HELP
LOOK AT BIDDYS POST
TAKE AWAY HIS VOTE HES BATTLYN ME NOw
HES HATIN THANKS
AN FEEBS ALSO PEEP YA PMS MAN I HVE A PROBLEm

meh - much as you slipped in swaying hints about his verse you still won , you had multies, he did not. you didnt have punches either tho... or personals.. your multies won this..

vote- pak n heat.

oh yea, and sway again and you lose. no swaying is allowed.

Begining: pak
Ending: nite
Flow: nite
Volcab: pak
Ryme Scheem: nite
overal: nitemarre

If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight
Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines}

yo PEEP BIDDY VOTE PLEASE ITS A HATE VOTE MAN DAMN
read my post
my bad for swaying PEEP YA PMS............................................... ......

YO THIS GOES STRAIGHT TA THAT NIGGA PAC N HEAT
THAT WHITE MOFUCKA NEEDS TA GO BACK TA MALIBU
CUZ I KNOW HE COULDNT READ THOSE STRONG WORDS OR DIDN UNDERSTAND THEM FUCK YOU WHITE WIGGA




BIDDY A HATA ~ONE~