biddy vs paknheat
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u corny so i'll spit first 40 minutes max no excuses no recycling no hate d/r or rew votes.. |
check in tho its been a few minutes now an still no drop from biddy this mite be takin u too long man if u dont hurry up i mite not have any option but to Get this CLOsed
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~say he poor from the street but he stay reppin the akademik tag/
~wrong word on my block ya ride home be the paramedics in a bag/ ~i be like a ghost that strolls through ur dreams every night/ ~straight winnin this batlle wit out a struggle or fight/ ~cuz i be like hannibal lector i eat yah brains and face/ ~but after i chewed u up i spit u out cuz u didn't have no style or taste/ ~cuz i'm not a rapper I'm more like a lyrical mind demon/ ~battle me u fucked urself and left urself lyin in ur own pile of semon/ ~so nexttime u wanna battle remember what the fuk i'm about/ ~no do like ludacris say and roll the fuk out/ |
^^^LOL u bouta get ya 7th loss kid damn
If ya a Veteren cuz of flows..you were given the wrong rank// ya couldn't come up "Big" even if ya were Tom Hanks// revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing// the only chance for Biddys votes…is if they die typing// November’s here, it’s clear Centrals number one on my hit list// Deflict ya spits, First stateing your from the hood then the woods bitch// dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss// beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs// what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece// cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys// I'm runnin through you.. like I was an I.V.you comin tight..that's highly unlikely// ya lines hit like beebes..my hollow tips left rips in ya text-ure// BIddy= NET THUG.the definition given in "Websters"// |
yooooo
flow=biddy punches=pakn structure=biddy creatiity=pakn wordplay=pakn overall=pakn close but it hink packn took it cuz biddy wasn't spittin hard and too simple needed betta punches-------- |
CAn sumone change his POLL vote
its wrong an shud be fore me as he states thanks for the vote......................................uppinnnn nnnnnn |
Begining:
Ending: Flow: Multies: Volcab: Ryme Scheem: If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines} |
Begining: Both
Ending: bid Flow: bid Multies: pakn Volcab: pakn punchs: pakn Ryme Scheem: pakn Over All: pakn If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines} |
I wrote a whole line by line breakdown, but accidentally deleted it...
So heres a short breakdown..... WordPlay = Pak Punches = Pak Flow = Even Personals = Pak ( both alcked but atleast Pak had one....) Structure = Pak IO felt Pak came harder than Biddy, and biddy's verse was overall pretty shit, he's punches came short and Pak took it..... My Vote = Pak N Heat pce |
uppin thanks for the help feeble..........................................
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aight,
This was again another close battle, I mean, i could hardly distinguish a deciding factor between you, You each had killa flow and wordplay. HOWEVER i felt that Pak n. Heat came out stronger with punches, loved the bar: "dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss// beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs//" - i felt that, that took it. vote:PAK N. HEAT |
sorry about freesposting, but could you return the favour, it'd mean alot:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88907 thanx. |
nice battle
flow=pak creativity=pak structure=tie punches=pak my vote=pak holla ================================= |
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