"South Tha Border" ---> ALBUM SHIT
 

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^"South Tha Border" ...

This just a rough cut... still gotta go in for mastering an' what-not...

"sittin' back chillin'
sippin' on a rum an' coke
got a blunt ta smoke
man i'm in heaven
havin' the time of my life
it's kinda nice
to get some piece an' quite once an' a while'"

...........Leave a link an' i'll peep your shit..........

uppin;....

listen...... yea im ready to smoke..... your mic quality not to good. but... flow is coo.... i hate the beat.... i think if you spit these lyrics to a better beat it would be hot.. seriously.......... coo shit.. you improved really.

thanx alot... my mic is a piece of shit... 15$ at radioshack, like i said tho this is a rough cut, like practice so i ain't wastin' my $ when i get into the studio.. an' the beat i agree is not the best i've used... but good looks... 1

Man, this beat ruins the whole track. The beat is the wackest thing I have ever heard. Flow is aight to be over this beat. Quality is ok, I can hear your mic rattling/hissing at the end of some of your lines. Not feeling the topic, you rapping about smoking blunts and drinking rum? That's mega played, what's worse is the fact that it's played by mainstream artists. Oh well bro, emotion was cool. Just keep doing you man.

ight returnin the LATE FAVOR...beat is ight...not my feelin but its ight...flow and delivery ios ight...u seem like u aint feelin wat u sayin...hook is so-so...cant tell when it comes in...overall it was ok...nuttin to special...lyrics were alright...

i wasn't feelin' what i was say'n because of the beat... an' how is it played if i did it.. shit, it's called being real... i went to mexico like 3 months ago an' wrote this there...

It's played because to many people write songs about it. Expand your topics bro. I see alot of your songs are about marijuana. Kinda makes me lose interest in your character and the picture you portray as an emcee. All I can say is that you should be you though. The fact of where you wrote the song doesn't make it not played and I would like to encourage you to be real. If this is you, then do you.

beat.. nahhh.. dont like it...flow is good but slips a couple times.. delivery is pretty good except you stretch out a couple words awkwardly... lyrics nothing groundbreaking but on a good beat it would be some cool chill shit...decent track once you get a good beat for it lol.. keep dropping.. and return the favor please.
peace

ummm... ok.. SZHliM... i understand what u'r say'n... but still.. this is me.. not on a constant, but like once an' a while i go on vacation.. shit... lol... what am i supposed to expand my topics to if i write about wha's real... shit, i write about my neighbourhood.. my life an' some off the wall fake shit but shit, i can't expand my topics to shit i don't know... serious... collab wit me, pick a topic... you'll see my skill... 1