Ego Trip
 

KEMYST
SAL THE KING
MONSTAR......I REPLIED TO ALL THEIR NEW ISHES


im everything you want to be.thats an m.c.-
the only reason we in the same division is cause your half of me.
my brain waves migrate-like mexicans immigrate-
across to territorial states.
murder those who hate-in slang editorial your just fake.
name any name he garbage if i diss him-
90 percent of his trash is enough to ruin the ecosystem.
it only takes one time so if i said it wont be repeated-
but i can leave you repeatedly deleted-and defeated-
im like the holes in the equator when im heated.
i have to eat m.c.'s...since my food rations are depleted.
your flame saint hot that shit dont even singe me lyrically-
my flows saltwater that drown you in my in~SaLTs (insult) to injury.
devour rappers-turn your hardest lyricist to cowards-
my brain storms rejister as meteor showers.

can i rock? yeah but id rather not.

instead i spit tidle waves,tsunami's,mansoons and typhoons-
when they "land" leaving 2/3rds of this earth water consumed.
my every writ leaves text dripped and ignited like a gasoline dip-
take m.c.'s to the point of flatline then burry them under it.
kill in plain dialect but murder in neosandscript-
you get rip in the middle like the word stRIPped.
its never enough till every body gets fucked stuck or stuffed-
the only way im taking an (L) is when im getting puffed.
im one of the nicest,one of the tightest-
you couldnt send me an ill line if you emailed me averse with a virus.
i'll never go platinum and what?-dont front.
you go plat but the fact is you wouldnt come of the top with a haircut.
this aint luck its skills but you cant fathom cause you suck.
its like having sex with a retard.... you just dumb fuck.
your concept of rap os all wrong- your talent is all gone-
plus your format seams like it was barrowed from a country song.
want free advice? then dont test-one of the best-
your shits all relative like you sucked from the breast of insest.

uppin

Dawg..

Check new rules..and follow them..

Else i must close this = )

MY BUST TWIN I GOT YOU

Good shit though...

Flowed on point...

Wordplay was raw...

Vocab expandance good...

Keep em coming...

Everything came through in this piece...
Flow was there...
Basically everything Gothika said...


Syn

every time i come back online you've pumped out anotha one!! tight shit!

Raw is a good way to explain this thread... but I was thinking more like crude, loathsome, grimy shit that would strip a bitch from all remaining dignity

Strong open

"im everything you want to be.thats an m.c.-
the only reason we in the same division is cause your half of me"

Clever

"i'll never go platinum and what?-dont front.
you go plat but the fact is you wouldnt come of the top with a haircut.
this aint luck its skills but you cant fathom cause you suck.
its like having sex with a retard.... you just dumb fuck"

Fav line

"kill in plain dialect but murder in neosandscript-
you get rip in the middle like the word stRIPped"

I'ma PM you the idead of that verse for the collabo... Peace

Aiyyo WP, collab wit me son. i'm tryna develop new styles and blends an shit and i'm tryin ta understand how you write whatcha write...

YO IM GLAD EVERYONE LIKED THIS AND KEYS IF YOU WANT COLLAB JUST PM ME I NEVER TURN DOWN A COLLAB

First post up in here in a while and its good to see theres still sum quality floating around. Ya shit was nice it flowed nicely for the most part though I was lost on sum of it. Ya vocab was good I aint got no problems there. Maybe ya rhyme scheme coulda been a bit more interesting but thats just cos its a text.

anyway hit me up on mine lucid blackness return the favour peace

thnks uppin