V-Cember vs The Aftermath (vote)
 

Yo...this a battle i got goin on......I reckon I got fucked on the votes man.....k.o'd by the kids crew OSA....drop a fair vote if you can, so i'mma see whether he did cane me so easily....

V - cember

u claim u an lyricist ,all u do is slack-off/
the only aftermath u know is after u wack-off/(aftermath=nuttin after u nutt)
they told me u was ill thought u was good what happen?/
the only time u had sick stuff in ur mouth,is when u went down on trina b4 she started rappin/
i come with sweet lovin lyrical perfection/
u a gangsta?the only time u hard is when u have an erection/
im spittin lyrics and crackin motion,spittin this lyriccal posion/
the only time u doin somthin raw is jackin off without lotion/
imma bout to lay this extra cum shot so we better load up the herses/
u betta stay faithful becuzz through the bible is the only way u spittin verses/
u done had a close encounter of the hip hop religouse demon/
imma embarace u and show ya moms u just a waist of semen/



Aftermath

I'mma dismember this fool V-cember swift...shits already got you miffed/
I'll stop ya so-called 'elevation' lyrically... ya basically stuck in a wordplay 'lift'/
Fool, ya gonna be just another simple addition to my ongoing list of merks/
This 'dawg's whimpering in the 'lounge' when he sees me drop my 'fire' 'works'/
Three wins don't mean shit, two hits on one means even less, I would'a thought/
I'm thinking 'how the fuck can you claim that shit with the weaker board rapport'/
This is your 'final destination', ya crews seen you fall in premonitions/
They compile the mass of ya battle votes, thats coming from their Own Sorry Admissions/
The only 'record deal' you got is with those herbs for ya 'battle score'/
Hardly raw, 'bout as tight as a hippies feet are to the floor/
'Rap Terrorist'? huh...Immensely Ridiculous Arsehole....you get the gist?/
'Young'uns sig quoting good reviews...shit....I'd have a whole fuckin list/
Forum 'underworld'.. you think ya 'made' with a simple net 'connection'/
I'm metaphorically 'rackateerin', your spitting verbs for my rep 'protection'/

yo ...i can't poll vote but i'll drop an opinion ne way.........

no doubt aftermath took this reason....
punches-aftermath...otha guy had attempts at punches but aftermath had better and more matured and more complex punches..........

flow-aftermath.....V-Cember ,....had a short ass line and then a long ass line and that through tha flow off hell...... tip dude in text make tha linez about tha same length so they flow good...sometimez tha short line long line thing will work but it didnt in your verse homie.........

Metas-Aftermath.....again otha dude had attempts but when it comes down to it aftermath just seem like he put more TIME and THOUGHT into it so he won that category........

Personels-i didnt really see any thats just me though........

Structure-aftermath for tha reason v cember had choppy flow cuz his linez w ere short long short long short long......

Overall-aftermath for better punchez and flow and meta and wordplay...........v cember yo shit was aight just put a little more thought in next time and yo shit will be Ill.......but for this one aftermath took every category......

Vote-aftermath...

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you marked this cat fo sho.....

Aftermath owned him

aftermath merked this fool, nice shit, can u drop a fair vote on these 2 battles plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2149#post882149

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2157#post882157

thanx homies

Nice one.... I'mma go to 5 votes man....to prove to the fool he got lucky...

No doubt Aftermath took this..
The other cat had a OK verse but nuthin special..

fact to the matter is..the ppl who voted didnt even see Aftermaths wordplay.

Aftermath took it on every level..

Can u say K.o?

Uppin for a final vote man...