ON THE CALI BOARDWALK dont sleep!!!
 

ayo new joint called
"Boardwalk"..its bout bein on that Cali boardwalk

DONT SLEEP
drop comments and the links to ya thread
and i'll drop comments on your thread

"Boardwalk"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/rewindmusic.htm

i like the beat..your delivery is good... your flow is off at times. i think its a lot to do with it seemed like a couple bars were forced in .. cuz your flow was real nice at times.. your speed up at parts was a little off...when you drag the words out sometimes i dont like that too well.. when your just doing your regular flow i like it.. just a couple little things sometimes i dont think fit as well...lyrics commercial..but cool.. little story kind a joint.. lol @ bike cops.. this was a cool track man.. i might lower the vocals some too. but this was still cool.. couple little flaws in my eyes that could be improved on... but thats all of us.. keep dropping man..
peace

return the favor please..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89343

uup
stop sleepin

AYO
UPPIN
REALL SHIT
:mad:

THIS SHIT IS ILL DONT SLEEP