Hi My Name Is...vs. SeeKret
 

16 lines max
no hate, crew, d/r...
any of that whackness...


start spittin as soon as ya can

alright homie ill hit this back up when he spits in the mean time

hit mine up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89310

honestly please and drop ure link

Thank God! You Stepped Up...I Almost Took On A Newb,
Shit...
This Sucks...
I've Looked Up
And Down For Talent...
N I Found U!
I Thought I Battled You Before...But I Recall It Was Perfekt,
HaHa! I Was Kinda Like U Fo A Moment...Just Plain Losin It!
Snickerin At Ya Hunger...Cuz Really SeeKret U Diein Of Thirst,
Change Your Style, This Massacre Looks Like I Took Red Die 2 Ya Shirt,
Mind Ova Matter, Nothin U Do Matters...So I Really Don't Mind,
If I Was U...I'd Witness The Struggle For W's To Coencide!
I Said Spit Now Whore! So What's Wit U Procrascinating For?
I'm Just On Line 10...But I Sence He's Already Written More!
Call Me Crazy, Why Not, You Tell Every Man That, N' Like It,
So When This Battle Is Stickied, Just Peal N' Place, But Don't Bite It!
^He's Agressive...So They Say, In Particular The Beings Of His Revolution,
You Say Your Talent...But All That I'm Seein Is "H'~E'~R'~B" Pollution!,
Majority Of The Time You Drop Decent, But Nothin Recent,
Because His Mom Is Round', He Sleeps Wit Her, Whoops...I Dropped a Seekret

Aight-- decent drop. We shall see who the better is...

-- I thought I was gonna have a challenge, but instead ima rip this lame kid.
- How you gonna beat me in a battle if you cant remember what your name is?
- If I lent you a million dollars you still wouldnt be playin with 6 figures...
- And youre about to get ripped like a white boy screamin Nigger.
- If skills was money this bitch nigga wouldnt have a cent.
-You probably think your shits hard, but it didnt make no damn sense.
- This bitch couldnt spit hot if his fuckin tounge was on fire.
- If you try to say you got skills then youre a motherfuckin liar.
- Nigga grittin like he hard but he cant even count his lines (he said he was on line 10 but it was line 8)
- He stays tryin to suck my dick so I can blow his mind.
- You shouldve stuck to battlin newbies cuz there you had a chance to win.
- Youre already 4-8 nigga...why you wanna lose again?
- You wanted a challenge nigga. Aight...thats fine...
- But you brought this shit on yourself...and now youre 4 and 9.

yo tight battle right here
aight...

FLOW: S
Punches: S
Structure: H....creative at the beginning
Opener: S...hit harder
Closer: h
overALL: S

non stop hard punches for seekret. hi had to many lines sayin that Seekret was alright...i think that kinda loses the agressive nature of a battle verse. i really felt the 2nd line of his closer though...could of set it up better w/o sayin seekret usuallys spits decent. Seekret good punch about the line haha. and solid closer i felt that shit...

my vote: seekret

yall hit this up when ya get a chance please..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89496

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin. vote...drop a link and you get a vote. its that simple

votes... honest 1's please

o n...that explination u gave about 1 of ur lines....
sayin that it was line 8...it wasn't line 8...it was line 10...
i'd pretty much consider it swaying...
cuz really...it's ur line that didn't make sence....
n ur tryna make it look bad on me... n Jego up there fell for it

ok...the battle was ightish......i was feelin both ya'll in punches but both were quite off sumtimes
BREAKDOWN
punches=tie
personals=hi
flow=tie
metas=hi
origanality=se
laugh fac=none..i jus dint
vocab=se
overall=hi my name is....
too close to call but i gotta call sum1

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP THE 1ST BATTLE IN MA SIG OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN YA..PZ

punches-S
personals-Hi
flow-Hi
vocab-S
disses-S
overall:S............. can u hit that battles up in my sig wit honest votes

yo seekret got this shit wit his disses and punches.That otha cat came tight but he juss wasnt good enough

Eh... I Was Expectin Better From Both... SeeKret Started Off Nice... But He Fell Off Toward The End... Hi My Name Is... Punches Didn't Hit That Hard And Some I Didn't Get.

SeeKret Took It With This...
How you gonna beat me in a battle if you cant remember what your name is?

Vote=SeeKret.

flow=seekret
punches=seekret
structure=seekret
wordplay=hi
creativity=hi
overall=seekret

seekret came harder on this with more personals---hi my name is had ana ight verse but wasn't hard enuff on the punch-tip.

My vote goes to SeeKret on this one for punches and overall better verse. Hi had some good shit too, but it just seems like See came a little harder and more direct with his punches. Good drop by both, but the vote goes to SeeKret.

No beef, no hate...

Hit this up with some thought... Thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88479

thanks for the votes. i just need one more to kill it............uppin............................... .....................

Seekret takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- Seekret