melodramah \/s. DaCurse
 

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yea..

ok we already agreed to spit sometime tomorrow
checkin in to aight...

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i already won this battle, readin ya name "curse" wit a D-A
thats a herb move, shows me my victory gonna be mad eaazy/
i see we both rockin jay all day, difference is.. imma girl
u havin that shyts kinda gay, like a newb arguin w/ votes tryin to sway/
im elevated so high "youll need wings" to pass me by (profile)
u & this battle like Nov.28 marks a ending u definately cant deny/
like jay u needa retire, he made a legacy, u in front of a keyboard startin to perspire
its a thug life where u come from? the only bullets u see is when u battlin me n u sweatin em/
DaCurse feedin off my verse, the only way he takes first, jot my win number 11 as a "merked"/

BTW: *Nov. 28 The Black Album comes out- JayZ's last album...yup

check in bout to start now
nice shit melo
gimme like 30 min i guess
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nice spit yo i'l drop my thought on it when ya'll done but can u drop and honest votes on my battles in my sig the gettin slept on u no how it was when u was a newbie

key'd this up reall quick...didn't want to postpone another day
so...


This is business subdued in pleasure like my dick stuck this pussy for days...
Couldn’t come close to me so chases my shadow to try to follow my ways...
Used to be wack...retired from battling now she’s back to obtain a new rep...
Nothings change bitch...you’ll soon come to find history repeating itself...
Stumbled upon your callout in bitch slapped...not your fault just bad timin...
Sent on a dummy mission for greatness and got stuck on tha Izlands...
Wit ya stretched lines and played rhymes...seems less the impeccable...
Neglectin you...like my used verses tossed in the closest receptacle...
Scotty beem’em...don’t belong here... rhymes wish I neva seen’em...
Legs crossed claimin you hard...only if you had a dick between’em...

this sucked..
but we still need votes

tight battle no doubt..here's the breakdown for y'all...

punches-straight up tie..close one
vocab-Dacurse
wordplay-melodramah
complexity-Dacurse
style-melodramah
flow-Dacurse
personalz-tie

vote-Dacurse got this..had good structure..

tight battle peepz..props to both
peACE

Polled Your Vote... So Don't Poll It.
-Axe

i agree and disagree
voc/curs
wordplay/both
original/curs
punch/both
structure/curse
style/melo
person/melo
injoyment/melo
meta/both
multi/both
overall/melo

vote/melo
yeah good battle, i had a hrd time diciding
but it came down 2 some personls that hit hard i think...
check out
me vs copy righted
mevs holster
only with an honest vote
holla>;o)

Err... Ugly Battle Here... Both Need To Elevate... Melo Had The Personals... They Weren't That Great... But She Was Personal... And I Almost Gave It To Her Because Of That But She Was All Over The Place With Her Verse... Da Curse Was More Consistent... But Eh... You Should've Took More Time On This.

Vote=DaCurse.

thanx guys still more votes
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[b]punches curse
personals curse
wordplay curse
vocab curse
overal curse

Yeah...

I'd say this one came down to punches and Curse most definately had more.

Melo landed too, just no where near as hard.

Plus, Curse had a nice personal or two in there.

Good battle, but up ya punch severity, Melo.

Peace

alright its 4-1 need one more..
but still need honest vote peeps
lets get some more vote please
drop the link i'll hit u up later i promise

Melo Verse Was Aite But Really Wasn't There It Was Sloppy And Was All Over The Place If You Took Your Time You Prolly Could Of Won This
Da Curse No Personals But Nice Punches In The Verse And You Got This Cause You Came Punch After Punch
Vote~DaCurse