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.:alliK:. 11-04-03 01:25 AM

suicide (what would u do?)
 
Suicide

[intro]
yo…I just want…every motherfucking body…to understand...the pain...of losing a friend...and I want...everybody...to know...I have felt the pain...and still feel it...and i wanna tell yáll...i didn’t give a fuck...when my grandpa...jumped...under a train...and I think that...the driver of that train...is a hero...haha...yo

[verse 1]
have you ever felt how fucked up it is to have a friend killing himself/
and if you hear the only thing you want is blow everybody away with a couple off shells/
i keep spittin shit for my dawgs straight outta my motherfuckin soul/
to all my dead homie’s...rest in peace y’all/
but to my mom’s father...burn in fuckin hell faggot/
I wouldn’t even EAT ya, if I was a hungry maggot/
But I’m human if you know what that means hoe/
I don’t wanna be family of this fucking homo/
I you was still alive I would’ve beat yo brain out on the flo/
But did I want you to kill yourself?...NO/
I wanted myself to kill ya bitch, with my bare hands yo/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/

[verse 2]
I wasn’t on your funeral you worthless motherfucker, cuz there was no funeral and I had too much fun/
Yo faggot-ass can I ask you how many of your children love you? That’s an easy question...none/
Yeah, we all hate you, period, done/
Let’s talk about one of my friends that killed himself too/
Not that I’m gonna diss HIM, he’s koo, peace to you!/
Thirteen years old he was, didn’t know what the futer might bring, not telling the truth/
You could have been here still/
But now my stomach and head are spinnin like a windmill/
What was your fuckin reason to kill/ (yourself)
I admitt I cried for u a while and had some pills/
Even though you’re not here anymore, I still got respect for you, you’re ill/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/



[verse 3]
suicide is a fucked up thing, G/
peeps don’t think twice for they jump,cut,bleed, or shoot and feel the heat/
i had suicidal tendeeys a couple of times, but I thought homie!/
and it worked cuz I’m still here as you can probably see/
too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
and that you’ve gotta answer that you feel fucked-up/
and tell that a friend killed himself and they ask, what?/
if I cried they laughed cuz they never felt the pain dawg/
they’re livin a good life whit happy parents and shit, fuck/
and I told these little mothafuckas, what would do if your friend just died/
bitch nigga...you allso would’ve cried/

[chorus]
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(what?)
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(once again)
(suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/
(suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/
(suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/
(yeah)

.:alliK:. 11-04-03 02:40 PM

o yeah forgot the votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4760#post884760

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4318#post884318

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4736#post884736
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.:alliK:. 11-05-03 02:32 AM

uppin

B~ill 11-05-03 10:26 PM

damn that shit was deep as hell,
and i think i know how you feel cuz my brother killed himself
over shit .... i rate that shit 9/10

-uski- 11-05-03 10:49 PM

yo dawg som tight shit aiight ill give a 5/5 for everything dawg that shit was awesome.


Aiight Peace (v)....{/]~{UsKi}~[\

.:alliK:. 11-06-03 09:09 AM

thanx y'all...

skitten 11-06-03 10:36 AM

wow. this was the best fucking open mic i've seen in a long time. i think real talent is here. i hate that line in verse three though. too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
Maybe you should make it a little shorter. Truthfully, this sounds like an Em song, which is cool. it could actually be produced.

A.T. 11-06-03 11:47 AM

good topic... but your hook kinda went astray... other than
that.. you stayed on course pretty well... Im liking the emotion
you put forth into this... keep droppin... this was a good peice...
soon, you'll be one of the top open mic heads in here...
~AshY~

skitten 11-06-03 01:24 PM

could u reply to mine?

devil's walking stick

.:alliK:. 11-07-03 12:52 AM

uppin

CHUC 11-07-03 04:46 AM

i can relate to dis one. good job.

Funn DementaLL 11-07-03 09:21 AM

deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
good concept an one thing you managed to do is make people feel like a relative to your work which in somewhat is hard to pull off... good read... good idea... structured rather well

= good post

.:alliK:. 11-07-03 10:01 AM

deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
^haha...lol

set-ignorance 11-07-03 10:36 AM

Nice, liked the emotional input, other than that 3/5 it was alrite Peace (produce it? rite) Peace

.:alliK:. 11-07-03 10:39 AM

thanx I apreciate


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