How will we grow????
 

How can we grow in this environment,urban decay, we burn away
Violence is all we see nowadays, is there a way we can play?
Without the threat of harm for the youth,it's rough in the endz
Nowadays I don't wanna sit on the corner with my friends
cos all that develops is trouble, all we learn to do is struggle
And when the sky turns the dark of night, no one loves you
You realise that life ain't fullfillin, we livin dull and life is grimy
Especially in Manc, all we see is grime and gun crime

How can this be our future, we in a matrix, got no control
Life gets hard, all alone, losin conrol, needin to hold
Need to hold on existing friends, slowly bein taken from the endz
How can this be justice, HMP (prison) the life thats for my friends

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1st verse and chorus just keyed now, want more holla and I'll continue

com eon, feedbak!!!

feedbak

This Wasn't Bad.. Decent Even.
Depth Was On Point And Flow
Went Fluently Yet Got Caught
In Sum Spots.. Just Try To Work
A Little On Getting To The Point
And Not Stretching It Out.. Thats All

Please Hit Mine Up In Return
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HOLLA MINE BRO......UK..!!
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Well....I begg to differ in allot of ways....But allso agree in many ways....

I read this earlyer in IT at college...and i really thought it was full of talent....

i liked the 1st bar....but what got me is the flow of this line...

"Nowadays I don't wanna sit on the corner with my friends"

I dno why...but it just strook me....

Overall man, I give it 7.5(8)/10....

uppin for some feedbak

Yo holla mine man..!!

That was so tight shit..word to that..keep it up