Island VS Bribeone1
 

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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-05-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-07-03

Good Luck & Drop Whole Assed....

HI......

I'm droppin quarter assed...

If u cant take the time
to understand wordplay
then dont vote....



saw yourself lined against me, your quater of a verse is array.
Av.. go find a bigger fag, to play your part Cast Away.
a Two line tourney..... is your great imaginary doing.
but the skid marks on you, are the two best lines that I'll b using.
this is quite amusing,
av mouse gets shaky when his keys fall on traps
his face gets ache-E .......when my hands bleed... full of slaps.
ehh..im dull on laughs, let me see this guy crack a smile. =)(get IT)
u and merk go way back, but when I hit u go a mile.
Your sad crew is in denial, their leader crushed by a blow.
ya girl should've kept the virus out her mouth...why?
.............. cause u never know...........

anybody can bribe one vote... let me go look this kids record up,
I saw the comment on the tourney... weren't you the first to rush and sign up slut..?
at you the world laughs, so advanced... my blank space could soil your past,
.$25 (_l_)... <~ picture that... and prove I saw your name and verse... still came quarter assed...
bye bye... last week... I didn't try... and this week I was hopin,
you'd drop garbage so bad... the site wouldn't thank you for postin...
and here it is folks... this newbie knows my real name and that's fine,
but how many times do I have to clown you fucks... when you explain your lines..?
and all your lines have been used... I'm sorry it seems,
but those are the same ones... I ghosted for everyone who wrote anything for Regime...




and I'm spent...

Bribe's Verse
saw yourself lined against me, your quater of a verse is array.
Av.. go find a bigger fag, to play your part Cast Away.
6/10...good
a Two line tourney..... is your great imaginary doing.
but the skid marks on you, are the two best lines that I'll b using.
10/10.....haha, dope
this is quite amusing,
av mouse gets shaky when his keys fall on traps
his face gets ache-E .......when my hands bleed... full of slaps.
5/10...so/so
ehh..im dull on laughs, let me see this guy crack a smile. =)(get IT)
u and merk go way back, but when I hit u go a mile.
6/10...not bad
Your sad crew is in denial, their leader crushed by a blow.
ya girl should've kept the virus out her mouth...why?
.............. cause u never know...........
5/10...could of finished stronger

Bribe's Verse=31/50

Av's Verse
anybody can bribe one vote... let me go look this kids record up,
I saw the comment on the tourney... weren't you the first to rush and sign up slut..?
7/10...good, but feeding?
at you the world laughs, so advanced... my blank space could soil your past,
.$25 (_l_)... <~ picture that... and prove I saw your name and verse... still came quarter assed...
4/10...meh
bye bye... last week... I didn't try... and this week I was hopin,
you'd drop garbage so bad... the site wouldn't thank you for postin...
9/10...funny as hell, but it could of been worded better
and here it is folks... this newbie knows my real name and that's fine,
but how many times do I have to clown you fucks... when you explain your lines..?
5/10...blah, could of been worded better
and all your lines have been used... I'm sorry it seems,
but those are the same ones... I ghosted for everyone who wrote anything for Regime...
5/10...once again the concept was good but the wording was off

Av=30/50

This was close, but Bribe took it with flow and slighty better punches.

Vote - Bribeone1

This was an aight battle ... Not great ... But aight ... I feel Avalon came better and more consitent then Bribe tho ... More witty ... Better punches ...

and all your lines have been used... I'm sorry it seems,
but those are the same ones... I ghosted for everyone who wrote anything for Regime...

That was the line that took this battle for Avalon ... There were others But I thought that was the best of the battle ...

Vote : Avalon

err quite close
bribe dropped a really good verse..and Av dropped good but i felt bribe got this
both opened up nice.but bribe hit more consistently..even though the personals were raining in
good battle folks
vote - bribe

yea I think avalon just took this off of sheer force.
That last line and a few others were just too strong...
umm...

did either of u try this week?

vote - av

Vote Av

This Battle Sucked & I Am Dissapointed In Both Of You.. If You
Guys Dont Feel Like Battling Anymore Then Sign Out... Av Signed
Out Already.. Bribe Just Drop Better Next Week

3-2 Av

Sorry Rich... LMAO ^was classic... he actually got mad at us... LMAO... Rich you sexy bitch you...

Truthfully i was feelin Bribe more

Av this was not your typical battle.....you came really weak.....it showed you jus put stuff together

bribe i enjoyed your piece......you had a couple of dope lines

Quotables :Av

bye bye... last week... I didn't try... and this week I was hopin,
you'd drop garbage so bad... the site wouldn't thank you for postin...

anybody can bribe one vote... let me go look this kids record up,
I saw the comment on the tourney... weren't you the first to rush and sign up slut..?

Quotables Bribe

a Two line tourney..... is your great imaginary doing.
but the skid marks on you, are the two best lines that I'll b using.

ehh..im dull on laughs, let me see this guy crack a smile. =)(get IT)
u and merk go way back, but when I hit u go a mile.

Vote Bribe

saw yourself lined against me, your quater of a verse is array.
Av.. go find a bigger fag, to play your part Cast Away.
a Two line tourney..... is your great imaginary doing.
but the skid marks on you, are the two best lines that I'll b using.
this is quite amusing,
av mouse gets shaky when his keys fall on traps
his face gets ache-E .......when my hands bleed... full of slaps.
ehh..im dull on laughs, let me see this guy crack a smile. =)(get IT)
u and merk go way back, but when I hit u go a mile.
Your sad crew is in denial, their leader crushed by a blow.
ya girl should've kept the virus out her mouth...why?
.............. cause u never know...........


Alot of quotes in there


Vote Bribe

4-3 Bribe

Its like Av didnt try at all...

Vote Bribe for giving some effort...
Was still weak though