don't sleep: P V Stuckmysta
 

10 lines, I spit 1st
no crew
dick ridin

etc etc etc........good luck Jeff

aiight bro' in...and fuck a hundred charachters this rule completely sucks absolute homo asses...................................sh!t

yeah cheers tarquin!! jeff? lol............................. ...................... ........ ....................... ......

Merkin in the battle of UK……………………………….


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Stuckmysta, You’re a newb, so why you wanna come and get sleyn
And playin Scrabble is the only way you’ll ever gain word game
28 year old loser….you still stuck on websites? Shit you all grown!!!
I guess that shows your wack…can’t get a deal, playin on sites on your own
So why does adult wanna battle an adolescent?...Hopin for an easy win???
You’ll never beat me…your talentless, so disinfect your rap wounds with gin
And as your name says…your stuck in a rut, battling me your get chewed up
Your fucked up…to the maximum, your never winnin, are you fuck
So give me the win now, This faggot don’t even have to breathe his verse
He’ll beat me??HOW??When when I’ve finished he’s in a hearse

with a rhyme like that boy, i wouldnt call myself profficient/
i looked for talent and style...but even decent flow's missing/
your brain'll get so fcuked up against me...youll need a catscan/
only thing you got in common with rap is....you know a black man/
your rhymes are like a ghost town...the bars are all empty!/
if you worked at a 24hr chemist...you couldnt dipense me/
im like a swarm around this kid....he's screaming from this beaststing/ (bee sting)
you couldnt even "come close" if you wanked near me, while i was sleeping/
and fuck my age brat!! i guess thats nothing to do with you/
ive dropped in more clubs than youve ever seen studios/
i aint lookin for an easy win...just here for fun and practice/
but i guess i got you sunk like kids with drunken baptist's/
fuck anuvva hearse line...man your shits played like nation lottery/
and you got a 1 in 14 million chance of your lines ever dropping me//

nice battle bruv...

never seen the 10 line thing......its coz im so old and blind!! :) fuk a hundred charachters...fuk a hundred charachters...fuk a hundred charachters...fuk a hundred charachters...fuk a hundred charachters...

Proficient Styles
Stuckmysta, You’re a newb, so why you wanna come and get sleyn
And playin Scrabble is the only way you’ll ever gain word game
^^Played, btw "sleyn" is spelt "slain", also English people pronounce and spell it "slew". *tut*. Typical Manchest textcee.

28 year old loser….you still stuck on websites? Shit you all grown!!!
I guess that shows your wack…can’t get a deal, playin on sites on your own
Weak

So why does adult wanna battle an adolescent?...Hopin for an easy win???
You’ll never beat me…your talentless, so disinfect your rap wounds with gin
First was stronger but still weak, second was wank

And as your name says…your stuck in a rut, battling me your get chewed up
Your fucked up…to the maximum, your never winnin, are you fuck
lol *shakes head vigourously*

So give me the win now, This faggot don’t even have to breathe his verse
He’ll beat me??HOW??When when I’ve finished he’s in a hearse
Nope, still very weak. No punches whatever, minimum wordplay, minimum multies, minimum everything except the obvious


Stuckmysta
with a rhyme like that boy, i wouldnt call myself profficient/
i looked for talent and style...but even decent flow's missing/
No punch, but a not bad opener

your brain'll get so fcuked up against me...youll need a catscan/
only thing you got in common with rap is....you know a black man/
lmao, Nicer

your rhymes are like a ghost town...the bars are all empty!/
if you worked at a 24hr chemist...you couldnt dipense me/
First was not bad, second was weak

im like a swarm around this kid....he's screaming from this beaststing/ (bee sting)
you couldnt even "come close" if you wanked near me, while i was sleeping/
First was weak, only the diception was good, second was weak, but i chuckled........slightly.......

and fuck my age brat!! i guess thats nothing to do with you/
ive dropped in more clubs than youve ever seen studios/
Did'nt paticularly rhyme

i aint lookin for an easy win...just here for fun and practice/
but i guess i got you sunk like kids with drunken baptist's/
Weak again, but the multies were aight

fuck anuvva hearse line...man your shits played like nation lottery/
and you got a 1 in 14 million chance of your lines ever dropping me//
Weakish, but better than your last verse

Vote - Stuckmysta

stuckmysta showed better skills and more maturity as an emcee.................................... vote stuckmysta........................................ ............................

Stuck fucked this up...

Clear and brutal merking.

He took this with heavier punches.
Better wordplay.
And some nice humorous metas.

PS came pretty played.
Some of it was borderline elementary, sorry.
Like, ending ya spit with the "verse/hearse" rhyme scheme.
Using "Scrabble" is really old as shit.

Just use more thought, looks like writer's block hit ya and you just went with whatever.

Seen better from you, PS...

Peace

uppin.............. fuk 100 characters 100 characters/100 characters/fuk 100 characters/fuk 100 characters/fuk 100 characters...fuk fuk fuk 100 characters............

uppin. still............. fuk 100 characters 100 characters/100 characters/fuk 100 characters/fuk 100 characters/fuk 100 characters...fuk fuk fuk 100 characters............