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Thorn VS Token
12 lines Maxed
Spit By Tonight We're both Vets, But I set it here so It dont get Slepped This Better be An ILL battle Toke Check In, and Drop an honest vote on Me VS Deva Thanks bro |
Roc Ya Body Mic Check One, Two
14 Lines Max... Like In The Bitch Slap Thread... lol i changed my mind |
My Callout dude So 12 lines maxed
Note: Check For personals, Their All True I Needed Some Elivation, But I Couldn't Aquire It from You Therefor If Ya Location was True......I wouldn't of Left Ur Crew U Still Havent Spit Yet? Read the Rules The Clocks Been Wound Check His Pro for the Occupation, A Question when Given Rounds You'd Think you were a Slut They Way I'll Ruin Ur Reputation This Kid Is Just a fruit, A Sex Educational Presentation (Condom on Bananna) Putting you to the Test, I'm Spitting Raid To remove this Pest If Tokens better than Me, Why'd I Get Matched with DM's Best? (Feeble-Diomonds) Tokens Broken more Newbies than Jesus feedin Crowds wit Bread On A Level Herbs Cant Comprehend, I thought thats what U Said? Its True that Records dont Count, It Matters Who You Beat So If Toke Lived Up to His..........Would he be Repping H.I.V? Spit When U see this I wont DQ U if you dont get around tonight |
*Shakes Head*... Played Out Punches...
Now For Your 3rd Loss... *Drum Roll Please* Quote:
^ Now Would You Please Excuse Me, While I Get Straight To The Facts I Dont Even Need To Throw Punches He Said It All In Bitch Slapped (Check Above) Settin Himself Up For His 3rd Loss... I'm A Thorn In His Side Knowing His Herb Tactics Will Prevail... His Lines Are Suicide My Verse Is Like Diseased Germs Infecting Your Brain Like African Lice You Got A Crown Of Thorns As Your Avy... What, You Think You're Christ? Only Considered Holy After People Read Your Verse And Say Oh God Once The Mods Close This... You'll Be Thankin RB Like G.Hod (G.Hod's Custom Title Is Thanks, RB) ^ Oh It's True... <--- Only Thing That Was Honest In Your Post Your Record Is Covering Up Your Wackness, Like Butter On Burnt Toast I Let You In H.I.V. Thinkin Maybe I'll Create A Newbie Sub Forum You Didn't Murder 23 Emcees... Those Kids Read Your Verse And Died Of Boredom |
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L A T E ' D What......thorn |
Man My verse didnt have Punches They Had all Personals
Did you read My verse? Votes ___-----__________________________________________________ _________________ |
Nice Guys...
Wanted Ta Give Feedback To Friends... Remix- Beautiful Punches... Punches Were Just Outstanding... Flow Was On Target... Work On Stronger Personals And More Metas... Overall, Great Verse... Good Luck... Thorn- Great Personals... Flow Was Pretty Good... Multi.s Could Have Been Better... Wordplay... Overall, Nice Drop... May The Best Man Win... |
sweet battle but Thorn gets his 3rd loss his lack of punches really really really hurt him this time
[b]BREAKDOWN[B/] opener- token....both good but token's had more heat closer-token...not great lyrically but nice personal punch combo punches-token personals-thorn...homie personals are more effective with punches creativity-thorn hands down wordplay-tie originality-thorn vocab-tie overal-very very close battle this is grounds for a rematch...but on this day token had the overal better verse |
Tokens best Line was The Christ one lol
Nice But dont compare ya self wit me with Personals Up |
^^^DAmn good ass battel
foreal............u both got talent.. sum hard skillz TOken took this in my eyes Close battle very even until that last line that did it for me..foreal remix remixed it up Lmao...damn that last line....lol v- token...Thorn no hate kid u came hard but hmm wasnt feelin everything Token had a solid verse http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622 ^^theres sum heat ..THorn U want next |
No
Im slowin my pace down i battle 6 times a Week, Runnin outa shit, My verses are gettin weaker and weaker This will be my last for a While |
Lol
yea u had like 26 battle spit on in like a week of time that was Liek whoaa... but u got skill id liek to revoke my vote actually i think Thorn took it sum better personals Still clsoe as fuk V-THORn http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622 ^^^^ hit it up Honestly see real HEat |
yo that was tight on both sides hard shit to judge but token i think had more punches. damn real good personal hits at the end...much props to both
can ya vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=executive |
good one
opener-token closer-token punches-token personals-Thorn enjoyment-token originality-tie creativity-tie multi's-Thorn overall-Token....... no hate ....good verses by both......... tokenn......can u hit this up with an honest vote?thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89622 |
yo tight battle right here...aioght....lets see...
opener: thorn closer: token personals: thorn punches: token flow: tie structure: tie shit hard to decide. i was really feelin thorns personals...all of em were tight as fuck... but token had some tight punches....the burn toast one and the g.hod one.....and fuckin good closer too.... damn this is a really hard one to decide...well im gonna go with thorn cuz good personals are harder to write than general hard punches. THIS WAS SO CLOSE THOUGH. vote; thorn ey yall hit this up wit an honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89496 |
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