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Ace Of Spades 11-04-03 12:42 PM

Ace vs Born To Kill
 
My rules:
10 lines
no cheating in any way
you spit first
no time
have fun
that’s about it
good luck dog
peACE

Born To Kill 11-04-03 01:51 PM

This is him...

Biography: dreamer
Location: unknown
Interests: God, girls, writing/rapping, playing guitar, video games, and doin nothin
Occupation: student


Have ya dented my record? If ya have I can't recall...
I guess like ya rhymes, ya leave impressions very small.
Ace of Spades went missin...on a milk carton for so long...
Just a kid lost in thought, so I'll send ya back where ya belong.
Ponderin ya loss, confused, schooled by the Killer of RB...
Ya commence ta moving on, by graduating to a lesser degree.
He puts God before girls, his profile shows it for all ta see...
But I'm the opposite and on my knees before him, cuz I worship pussy.
He's a dreamer, accomplishments like vegetarians on mutton...
So drop ya verse like ya jerkin off cuz ya fond of doin nothin.

Ace Of Spades 11-04-03 05:01 PM

Lets do this...

lets try something new...

Distorted proportions, we've all been taught to believe that practice makes perfect//
Retorted extortions, checking this kats rec and verse shows that practice ain't worth-it//
34 years old and hes still thinking that head-hunting's a profession//
Similar to that of his rap game, they are both pointless obsessions//
Take a glance, you'd think that after 128 battles one you would progress//
Wrong, disguise this guys post and he's just a noob doing less than the best//
Lets protest this arrest, I'm degrading your ratings with my residual violence//
Killing you softly, even though i bid you one of my friends//
Stripped you of desire, pursued you to retire, your purpose of birth is filled//
Stepping up to me altered you, cuz in reality you were born-to-BE KILLED//

my style changed for this battle a little...
nice verse dog...
we still coo...
good luck...
uppin...
peACE

Born To Kill 11-04-03 05:28 PM

Nice verse, my man...Of course, we coo...

Let's see what these cats think about our rhymes...

Vote up!

Ya got a good battle ta judge.

Thanks.

Peace

Born To Kill 11-04-03 05:51 PM

It's a sad day at RB when Ace of Fuckin Spades and Born to Goddman Kill face off and no one peeps it for over 30 minutes...

1st Uppin for votes.

V.A. $lim 11-04-03 05:52 PM

I dont know


they were both real good verse I just think born to kill hit a little bit harder but this aint an easy one to judge
but Im gon go with born to kill

I took the time so should you

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89724

Ace Of Spades 11-04-03 06:03 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
It's a sad day at RB when Ace of Fuckin Spades and Born to Goddman Kill face off and no one peeps it for over 30 minutes...

1st Uppin for votes.


werd^..haha..
uppin..^thanx for votin

peACE

Mr.Christensen 11-04-03 06:07 PM

im going to have to go with BTK on this one
i dont know about you but im getting tired of the same
'your 34 years old'
line

ace's line were stretched, in my opinion...

punches were about even, flow went to Born

vote Born

$pitacular 11-04-03 06:16 PM

yo don't feel bad no one peeps my battles either until I force them to or up them the max amount of times... fuck that shit


good battle yall, I have to go with Ace on this though, I have madd respect for Born, but Ace's personals hit home... and were hard hitters. I think Ace got carried away with the vocab, a little gibberish here and there, but the punches were good. good drop by both, this battle is gettin madd slept on.

vote = Ace

yall hit this up w/ an honest vote when you have time

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88886

thanks

MyNd. FuLL 11-04-03 06:42 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
It's a sad day at RB when Ace of Fuckin Spades and Born to Goddman Kill face off and no one peeps it for over 30 minutes...

1st Uppin for votes.


LMAO ^^^^^^
yea sorry guys, today seems yo be a slow day for some reason
anyway...



i liked both verses but i think Ace got this one
punches were about even and flow was too although Ace's
lines were kinda stretched throughout the verse, but i was still fellin his verse more
i liked b2k verse as well, but the vocab stood out for me in this one
no hate to b2k
good battle guys
hope it dont get slept on

poll vote=Ace of Fuckin Spades
out

MyNd. FuLL 11-04-03 07:42 PM

please vote on this guys when you get a chance
need honest vet opinions and votes here

thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89553

Nexxt 11-04-03 08:01 PM

hey hott bttle...no doubt
born to kill came hard but ace of spades also hit hard...
even matched, but i go with ace of spades, i like his verse more.
Personals were hard 4rm ace of spades and just thought dats wut edeged out this tough bttle.

Ace Of Spades 11-04-03 08:29 PM

thanx for voting peepz..i knew this one would be tight..no doubt..
alright then..uppin....
............
...........
peACE

Rappad 11-04-03 08:52 PM

aight not gonna do a one line unexplained vote, but I will break this down thoroughly...

B2k-
Have ya dented my record? If ya have I can't recall...
I guess like ya rhymes, ya leave impressions very small.

^^lol...decent opener...pretty good punch...7/10

Ace of Spades went missin...on a milk carton for so long...
Just a kid lost in thought, so I'll send ya back where ya belong.

^^nice personal.....8/10

Ponderin ya loss, confused, schooled by the Killer of RB...
Ya commence ta moving on, by graduating to a lesser degree.

^^didn't like this...weak punch...6/10

He puts God before girls, his profile shows it for all ta see...
But I'm the opposite and on my knees before him, cuz I worship pussy.

^^lmfao....nice shit....perfect wording of that line....10/10

He's a dreamer, accomplishments like vegetarians on mutton...
So drop ya verse like ya jerkin off cuz ya fond of doin nothin.

^^nice finisher...good shit...9/10

Total-40/50

comments-nice verse, nearly all bars were nice, good personals etc.....most of all what I liked in ur verse was the arrangement....and by that I mean each line was arranged to flow perfectly, which as opposed to a lot of other peeps on rb, who come up with great ideas for punches but can't figure out a way to arrange them in one line.....nice job....

Ace-
Distorted proportions, we've all been taught to believe that practice makes perfect//
Retorted extortions, checking this kats rec and verse shows that practice ain't worth-it//

^^nice opener...real nice flow...good punch...8/10

34 years old and hes still thinking that head-hunting's a profession//
Similar to that of his rap game, they are both pointless obsessions//

^^this would be good if everyone else who battled born didn't use it as well......5/10

Take a glance, you'd think that after 128 battles one you would progress//
Wrong, disguise this guys post and he's just a noob doing less than the best//

^^decent...a bit weak.....7/10

Lets protest this arrest, I'm degrading your ratings with my residual violence//
Killing you softly, even though i bid you one of my friends//

^^decent punch, messed up flow...6/10

Stripped you of desire, pursued you to retire, your purpose of birth is filled//
Stepping up to me altered you, cuz in reality you were born-to-BE KILLED//

^^lmfao...tight ass finisher..10/10

Total-36/50

comments-decent verse, couple of weak punches, my advice is when you battle someone and plan on using personals, search some of their other battles and read a couple of them, or make personals off of them, etc.......your verse was nice, no doubt, but born cam just a bit harder...

Vote=born

mad props to both.......bout time I see a nice battle in FL

loke101 11-04-03 08:56 PM

That is a good battle I say to both of you. You both had great punches vocab this is a tough one to judge but I give it tO................................................ ...............................

Ace of Spades because well his just sounded slightly better
Sounded more expierenced

Nice shit ya'll

on frontlines you can check one of my first 2 battles out as
Loke101 vs Nitemarre
Catch vs Loke101

No one is voting so please hurry and post something :)

aight fam

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