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[Dreading Doubts]
Only imperfections were my reception into this world
The autumn leaves makes me no exception to be frail Reflections gone pale from holding the burning tears That weep from ear to ear that makes my skin smear Smiles you see isn't here inside where I feel deprived I'm so screwed I can't even start to reveal & describe What I shield & hide inside but i'll try like I normally do Lifes horribly viewed through sharp eyes, yet so blunt People keep pushing my potential but get cold shunts Did my childhood involve mumps, cuz I seem impotent No matter what you do,You can't redeem involvement I fiended solvements but I ain't very proud to admit it Angrilly I matured into a man through all this hardship Maybe adolescence hasn't departed?I still have angst But when I have writers block I actually feel the blanks Feeling refelctions of my life & objection to whats right Theres no exception of my hype,I've come from nothing Others see this sooo scary that they run when bluffing Or do they run from something thats strangly mutated But I have older cats about me being lamely duplicated Am I confusing or refusing the truth. . Am I a half herb cuz I cut my routes. . |
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This Was Great Kid..
Ya Lines matched Perfectly, Which Sum People Dont Realize Isn't Easy To Do.. Depthe Was Clean, And Great Meaning. Nice Vocab.. Deff. Elevating.. Good Read Closer Was Dope |
Thanx.
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Gr8 peice man, like Auspicious sed, its hard to make ur lines equal, but jus cus u got equal lines dont mean ya flow is gr8. However you flowed well in this.
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Potent.. this was a dope piece man. As I say in every reply, the flow makes the piece, and the flow in this was mos definately on point, which made the read so damn good. Shit was smooth. Vocab was on up there cuz, I like that. Multi's were present, and ya lines were matched.. and the fact that it's difficult to get them to match and flow well too.. and you did it... makes this drop even better.
Maybe adolescence hasn't departed?I still have angst But when I have writers block I actually feel the blanks ^^ Word to that. I have over 50 tracks written out, ready to record, so writers block for me is more prevelant now. Keep droppin man, this was def. ill. -Formula. **Mind if you return the favor N drop a reply to this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89489 Thanks.** |
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