my poetic genius
 

LIFE W/O SEX

life w/o sex is pointless
a wife w/o breasts is a test
sex w/o protection is the best
but life w/o sex is pointless

strange poem but it was good. its true. life without sex is pointless and boring. if it feels good, do it i say. keep dropin nymfo.

MM

Agreeance with Mopar on it bein strange. Not too many like this in here. Its short..and to the point. Hey if ya like it, do it as much as ya want. And yes it is boring. This drop is a view of many guys, and I say as Mopar, if ya like it...do it. Much respect. Keep droppin.

lol well what a piece

cant say too much about it because its simple and straight to the point. and with only 28 words i think you got you message across loud and clear!!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

I'm sorry but the next line of that should have been:

"just as this poem is pointless"

That's just a blank statement, there was nothing in those words to gauge any type of critisism on, other than that poem was pointless. Save RB the time of reading junk like that, read a dictionary or something, a lit book, learn the areas of poetry an then try again cause I'ma say you failed at this attempt my friend. Peace