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[week4] Calda Merda (1-0) vs Born to Kill (1-0)
Topic: The Daily Grind
due date: saturday judging ends: monday |
Oh man...
Do I ever know about this fuckin topic... Checkin in. Good luck, Calda. My first vote: White Lightning vs. Sureal My second vote: Hi My Name Is vs. Baron God vs. Deacon My third vote: Taktik vs. T Square |
The Daily Grind
Erosion in my mind, like being imprisoned in a canyon… Ain’t nothing grand about it, except my two companions. But for most of the day I’m alone, just me and a screen of pixels… Tryin ta make long dollars by utilizing worn, cerebral utensils. I’ve been working for so long, since 11, well, now I’m 34… Everything from mowin yards ta huntin heads, and still it’s all a bore. At times I’m a saviour, ta scope domes means putting peeps ta work… Cuz when ya unemployed with family and bills, ya can easily go berserk. It’s gratifying, I guess, when a man says, “you saved my life”… Cuz he knows another month on the couch woulda cost him his kids and wife. That helps, cuz when it happens I feel less abrasion from my daily grind… But most days it leaves a taste in my mouth like catchin Socko from Mankind. Entwined, are my feelings of rebellion and aggression, for here I’m trapped… Angry that I can’t get paid for chillin, playin with my kid, and writin raps. Forlorn cuz when I wake up, I don’t wanna leave the arms of my lady… But I need to cuz at Christmas, there’s gotta be presents under the tree. And there won’t be, if I fail ta man up everyday and hit my office hard… I work for myself, my own boss, I ain’t punchin no one’s time card. So any fuckups are on my head, the weight of that thought could snap a neck… Failing can’t be an option, my wife and baby depend on my check. So I hit the daily grind with a passion, but it’s the passion ya save for a whore… No real heart in it, but cum hard everytime, and make sure I leave tha bitch sore. |
Daily Grind
~ The Man Who Lived Well ~ People Fail To See Reality, Therefore Causing Improper Fallocies - They Mark Me With Polite Talk n' Greet Me With Formalities - I Live With A Greater Cause, n' Cause Greater Lives - Add Hate To Size, n Rise To Occastions Thought Improvised - Paste My Streets In Gold, Paint My Doors In Pearls - Money Revolves Around Me, I revolve Around The World - I Egaderate My Mind, Yet It Doesn't Wander Distant - Opptomistic, What Would Be A Good Life w/o Me In It? - ~ The Man Who Didn't ~ People Fail To See Reality, Therefore Causing Improper Fallocies - The Mark Me With Hate n' Throw Hateful Formalities - I Live Life Poor, Just To Pour Out My Soul - Growing Old, Still Must Do What I Am Told - I Hate My Life, n' Question How Hell Can Be Much Worse - I Hurt, For Those Lives Who Are So Deeply Diverse - Home Is Where The Alley Is, Drink My Life To Shame - I Know Many, Yet Many No Not My Name - ~ Grinding Off Their Faces ~ {bumps into each other} Dont Mind Me Sir, Fore I Am Clumsy At Times - Swine, You May Have The Minutes, But Your Wasting To Many Of Mine - Fine.. I Meant Not To Hit You n' Apologize For It So - Your Too Old.. Dont Wander The Streets, Go Home - Alone, I Dont Make The Money That You Do, Its Un Pleasent - Resented, I Have No Money For You Peasent - I Recall No Question Of The Sort n' Resent your Comment - Scum I Am Stereo Typed.. But I Do Not Have To Live Up On It - Promise, I'd Never Be Seen With You For Another - Tell Me..Is It Really That Easy..To Turn Down your Brother? |
Ya'll Are Lucky
That I Aint Even In This League And I Still Vote... Anything To Make RB Betta... First Of All... Born To Kill Took A Somewhat Personal Approach, A Style I Dont Really Like... Never The Less, He Did A Fair Job With This... I Havta Go Wit Calda Merda Though, Because I Liked His Flow, Ryme Scheme, And Approach A Lil Betta... No Hate Here... Vote... Calda Merda... -Azaz |
born to kill actually surprised me..was quite a good verse
started off really nice and was quite emotive thru out calda merda really nice approach to it..took the unforseen path seemed alot more polished and enjoyable to read...liked the convo and the flip at the end...really pushed your verse to get my vote both flowed well...calda perhaps better...btk you just had a verse which was too basic need to up the complexity good battle though |
I have no clue what you are talking about Fgee, I didn't like B2K's at all. It was very sloppy, rhymes were really stretched, flow was off. This was nothing as to what I have seen you do before, you did not live up to your potential. Calda had a nice lil twist, flow was off, even though lines were equal, complex verse, enjoyed rhymes inside the rhymes, and a great story. Calda Merda gets my votes for all the right reasons.
Vote- Calda Merda |
I Agree With Mad Man.
Caldas Twist Was Nice. Great Story, And Internal Rhymes. vote - calda merda. |
Vote = Born to Kill
This battle was okay, but I was expecting a little more in a sense. Born to Kill, your verse was cool, but could of been better. The ending was cool, but I think you could of added a better twist to it. Calda Merda, your verse was slick as well. Complex, easy to follow, but I wasn't feeling where you went with the topic. I understood the concept, and thought it was creative, but it seemed more like bickering than grinding if anything else. Could of used a little more detail at the end as well. Decent battle, but Born gets my vote for being a little more on topic.
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3-1 for Calda...
But hey... If he was banned as a cheater... Then reverse this loss... It's tainted now. Isn't it? Pretty fuckin please. |
lol
Calda had a good idea but I think he could've carried it off better. BTK didn't really feel you that much. Seems like your topic and flow was inconsistent. |
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