OLI_DOGG Vs sLiCaD3n'u
 

Ite dogg

8 lines(max),
ill spit 1st u spit 15 mins after,
no feeding,
no crew or d/r votes...

ite gd luck man.....................pz

checkin in................................................ .............ima drop in da nxt 15......................pz

Aiight Homie I'm here go head and spit.
OH!.....and dont let the record fool you kid I got skillz I aint no push over.
Not talkin shyt just dont wanna be under estamated!!!!!

ite dogg lets do dis

sLiCaD3n'u wat kinda unreadable *name*, u bringing to this *game*,
before searching for *fame*, id battle a herb, cus otha wise the loses on ur record you wnt *regain*,

listen man dnt battle cus even my lil sister could beat *you*,
im not a vampire but with my lyrics ill eat *you*

my words like an *injection*, breaking glass like your *reflection*,
i own this hotel, when your still stuck on *reception*

use already a herb, im a vet in the *makeing*,
wen u awnserd my bitch slapped, i thaught sweet an easy win for the *taking*.

dun man spit within 15..........................pz

^understood man............................................... .................................................. ...................................spit........... ....gd luck.....pz

cmon man uve had 35 minuits n i sed 15 hurry up dogg.............................................. .................................................. ...........................pz

Ayo' I'm fenna put dis nighaz style out like playin wit pogs//
I'm sliCa Den u, tell me kid...what da phuk is a Oli dogg//
Benya Benya da poli wog, you gay//
Look at chu hangin on every werd I say//
Hopin da next line I miss, Kuz you bitch//
like you squat when you piss//
I'm at da top of da list, Nigha da kream a da krop//
And you kouldnt beat me if I was your cock//

nt bad man, c how da votes go................................................ .................................................. .........pz

uppin dis battle (12).............................................. ........honest votes............thx....pz

yo.........

flow: olidog
punches: olidog
fuck this...oli took every category

vote: oli

slica....work on the flow stayin nicer and even and makin ya punches hit harder...benya benya polli wog?

oli dog good verse but i'd say lose the *stars* thast mad herbish and u dont need to put those on to emphasize ya rhymes. otherwise ill verse

both of yall hit this up wit honest votes please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7403#post887403

oli took tihs
slic is crazy style its understandable
oli had mre injoyability

vote oli
check it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89509
holla >;o)

ITE THX UPPIN DIS SHIT(3)........................................... .................................................. ......PZ

this was a weak battle....
but anyway..
punches-slic
flow-oli
originality-slic
structure-oli
opener-slic
closer-slic

slic the only thing that ;lost this for u was that ur flow was way off.. if that was better u woulda got this, cuz i wasnt feelin oli's verse tha much.. but yea ur structure n flow needs work..
vote=oli (hesentantly)

punches = oli
flow = slic
creativity = ol

vote = oli

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89765

i think both of you need a lil work every rhyme was basic and predictable but non the less i give it to oli dogg .....ya just need to elavate a lil ...late