Dominator -vs- DaCurse
 

10 Lines Max
30 min blind spit....
No crew votes
no hate
no dr

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I see your records fourteen and seven, well dawg your about to get ate
Like the guy who pukes at a party, your just a poser who cant handle his weight
Your a waste of my time, someone shoulda told me, I was fuckin with a clown
Kiddo, ima steal your life preserver so when I spit my flows leave ya to drown
If I payed you a dollar per good lyric youd still be left broke off your rhymes
You could rap your whole damn life and still couldnt any afford nicks or dimes
I show no regard, And Im'a break you in half so I can beat you twice as hard
Leavin ya physically scarred, youll be layin in a hospital readin a get well card
Youve been gettin dickridden worse than Ron Jeremy, winnin but dont deserve to be
It ends now, because even if someone gave ya a glock, you still couldn't murder me

aight...


Kids rockin...meetin defeet like strangers introduced in kickboxing...
More run-on stretched lines than broke women in ripped stockings...
Shootin blanks wit...guns loaded..but bullets couldn’t be traced kid...
U’re unoriginal...recycles just to prove he knows u what a remake is...
Giving face lifts...known for rearrangin frames like women in girdles...
Yea this kids def...caught him playing music chairs...walkin in circles...
Theres no escapin dude.. for future reference your records in 8 and 2...
I knew my verse was a pain in the ass...cuz I got arrested for rapin u...
Wanna roll wit vets...nah, Not even my wit name in ya scrollin text...
Couldn’t see a decent flow less it was running from ya nose at best...



lets get some real votes peeps..
drop the links i'll hit u up...

This was a good battle.... UPPIN X 1

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YO REAL EVEN BATTLE

flow: curse
structure: tie
punches: tie
wordplay: curse
opener: curse
closer: curse

looks one sided but all categories were all even. no hate dom....it was an ill verse.

really feelin curse, everythin flowed perfect with good creative lines

vote: curse

yall hit this up wit an honest one thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7403#post887403

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vote do
injoy/do
vocab/do
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multi/meta/both
flow/do
struc/da

and a ok
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89509
me and holster
1 vote
holla

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Close

Structure.........Both
Flow................Both
Wordplay........Curse
PUnches.........Both
SImiles............Curse
Vote...............Curse

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Wow, close battle, the breakdown for the most part:


Dominator: Best part was ur flow, everything was well into place. Punches were there for the most part. The beginning was nice, a tight similie with nice wordplay in the first line. Ending was kind of wack, I think the "glock" lines are played out a lil. But solid verse overall.

DaCurse: Beginnin flowed very well, a nice similie to go with it. Very consistent with ur punches, I think the flow was a lil messed up right around the "remake line." But after that, everything was nice. Complexity was there too, and the ending was nice. Very good drop.


I'm a have to with DaCurse for a lil more complexity in his verse. Hot battle and much respect for both. Sry I can't poll, please drop an honest vote on my battle (link is below), it's gettin madd slept on. Much appreciated pz.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89525

Da curse got this due to better structure and more consistency, Not a bad drop from either, but da curse wins

not a well explained vote^^^^can a mod delete that vot please
need better explanations folks
this ^^^is not a good explanation...and should be deleted..
i'm getting a mod....

directed at Aragorn, i could care less if he voted for me or not we need better explained vote

out.......

yah this was a tight battle and we want explained votes...... uppin X 4......

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vote - curse

better world play structure and flow, this was a tight battle n both of u r tight................ drop a vote on my battles

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