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Mista Raedar Vs Robo
iight here the rulez
10-12 bars no dicc ridin/crew votes 45 mins to drop verse lets go playa jus checc in |
ok man im checkin in lets do it, heres my verse
yo yo Heres your chance to improve, But u could grind ur rhymes with sandpaper and they still wouldn't "come smooth//Robo just bashes ya with lashes to leave ur face opened up with gashes, hury cut and paste before your computer crashes//You just act like Usher, u keep comin' back MY WAY,You'll prolly be like Ice Cube and come back at me Next Friday//The only way u beat me Mista is if I didn't spit my verse,This rap is like a curse intended for much worse than to just cause hurt and lay u face up in a hearse//So this should sum it up real quick and leave u with a stagger,Mista you wouldn't win this if it was Cali and u were Schwarzenegger//Leaving nothing left to say, ill say it all with my rhyming,Ill lyrically rape your ass like my man kobe Bryant//But we can skip the court case and leave that in seclusion,get straight to the punishment and that’s execution, By means of leathal injection, lets make a correction,the rhymes I spit spread and kill like a deadly infection//or an ancient disease, that pops up and kills thousands and brings others to their knees//Im gonna rephrase this so you can relate, its like a home run,a touchdown, or a check mate, cause this game is over, shoulda brought the rabbit foot, a horse shoe, or a four leaf clover//but you didn’t man and that’s a shame, it coulda brought you luck man, maybe that’s whats to blame//Or maybe its due to the fact that you just have no ability, you rap like a skitzo in a mental facility//everything i drop is hot, im passin the mic to you..lets see what you got ur up |
ok man you have till midnight on November 8,2003 to post your verse, so we can get them votes comin in
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Yo man are you gonna spit ur verse or not, damn come on
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DAMN im gettin tired of wait'n on your ass, whats the deal man why arent you spittin, hurry up, damn
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no more fun-N-games,slappin ya in your motor/
lets play bone collector imma be the decomposer/ treatin you like bugs,exterminatin you when I spray/ oh what you on trial,im bout to end your case/ steppin on you like bugs when they tryin to run away/ you claimin you a soldier,but you a bitch like G.I Jane/ my rhymez is sicc,harder than errections/ got you multi-faced like a michael jackson mascilation/ ur a wack ass all u do is battle weak kids/ u like a japenese slut u'll get easy wins |
ok ok good job, now lets get them votes in
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Come on we need some votes for this battle
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Robos verse was not structured good but it had better metas and punches.........................raeder didn't come hard enough
.........................gotta be a lil more creative I think........................ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91269 Hit this return the favor............................. |
NICE NICE, but we need some more votes UPPIN
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Man come on, we need some votes, what people cant take time out to vote on our battle or what?
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uhhhhh robo merked mista here----robo blazed it then gave the mic up and the mic just froze..lol...well robo go tthis obviously betta punches, metas, wordplay vote=robo
yo hit my battle up with doube o seven honestly thanxxxxxx |
opener:robo
closer:robo wordplay:robo structure:mista punches:robo overall:robo robo owned this guy, you need to sort out yor structure and ur lines are a little stretched, jus keep elevating honset votes would be appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91494 |
oh, yes, Robo was murkin hea, but he needs to BADLY work on structure...
mista just needs to work on tha whole thing period, although he did have structure... battle was barely worth readin but i'll vote for...Robo check minez against names... |
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