devil's walking stick
 

replied to:

rules of the game - lulong
setting goals - deva
suicide (what would you do) - allik



sometimes i think i'm blessed because i was sent on this quest
it makes me stressed, but i'm possessed by rapness
excuse me..... our next guest is the winner of the contest
fuck being the best....... she's just obsessed with her chest
she makes her place in this over dressed rap nest
but check it out... she just a chick who walks around wanting your slippery dick
you had better be quick, i'll hit you wit my devil's walking stick
i'll take a brick and pick which one of you i'm going to hit
i get a kick when i see that man running out of the room quick
did i make him tick?
is he too scared to lick my clit?
i'll lick his dick with this fucking button click.

thought ya flow was ok, but it fell of in the middle, , the vocab was pretty limited, dunno bout the concept, but it was better than the last of yours i read....keep practicing,...aight...peace!
oh and thanx for hittin mine*

it was a bit short but aight...
elevate on your vocab...
flowed well...
nice piece...
seen better...
keep droppin...
6/10

ok, flow was ok, the piece could have used some more multies...the vocab was ok also and could be upped...structure was decent but could have been a lil better...content was decent but could have been better also...overall it was just ok....keep dropping though, you'll get better...

-1-

Umm... Were Those Last Lines A Joke? They Were Retarted...


I Wasn't Feelin This.. You Never Really Conveyed The Devils Walkin Stick. Stay More On Topic.. And Be More Specific. You Tried To Hard With The Multis.. Don't Force Em. Overall An Ehhh Drop... But Keep On Droppin.. You'll Get Better.

I don't wanna repeat da above, itz all true. U probably sick of all dat newayz. Nice try though.