RENEGADE (remix)
 

ay yall i wrote this to the beat of JAY-Z and EMINEM's RENEGADE but its not done and im lookin for someone to collab with so PM me if ya wanna (u'll need 2 verses).

the three open mics i posted on were:
Slicad3nu- da fall of a great man
A2Z- Scetchbook Of Rain
Synical- Synical Ego


I’m the only rapper my age that’s classified as urban//
Disturbin, my whole generations methods of learnin//
But I cant help it if I’m far further intriguing//
Than a bunch a dickheads have our youth completely misleading//
Pleading and bleeding// dragged around kicking and screaming//
Drownin in the hazards of dreaming//
they beg us to keep reading//
When actually my blood has been heating//
my spinal fluids been leaking//
Hunched over everybody’s critiquing//

gimme some feedback

ay yall gimme some feedback, come on yall.......
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Ok Alpha here I give you big ups on this 1 b-cuz you aint just talkin bout beef shit you talkin bout how you hold yo self up dont let nobody stop you from what you doin keep droppin kid -1-

thanks to the ALPHA for the feedback, want some more tho, keep em comin and if any one is down for my collab thing lemme know through PM

that's hot. i like the way it pieces together. if you still lookin for someone to work with hit me up and we'll see if you tryin to colab. hold it down

ay that shit was tite and cant wait to see it finished... keep elevatin in this shit we call the rap game.. PEACE

Way To Stay Up..
Not A Bad Drop..
Could Use Some Work
And It Was Quite Short
For An Open Mic But A
Decent Drop None The Less

Hook Up Sum Feed Back Here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?

Decent drop! You got potential i can see it..just keep elevating and workin on it..aight peace

ay yall i need some feedback HOLLA AT ME __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________

i liked it needs brshing but ill none the less

ay yall come on i need some more fuckin feedback and if anyone wanna collabo lemme know and i might hit yall up with some more peices of the track later.....