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bloodshedd 11-06-03 07:49 PM

ma name is robbie aka realest aka bloodshedd
 
yall gotta know ma name is realest
im also known as robbie or bloodshedd
beef any nigga that think they better n they could get very far
my rhymes are toxic n a killa jus like the virus sars
some people say ma rhymes is from another planet maybe mars
i keep it gangsta all the time, spit bare truth n batter faggots wit ma every line, sick of all these pussy ass niggaz that hide behind their nines, without it i'll brock their nose n their spine, they ain't smart up stairs, like me i'm like albert einstine
when i spit ur fucking face looks like frankinstine
spitting for fun to keep yall interested
so u can stay out of trouble n not get molested

FUCK THIS

i await a challengeeeeeee
ma warm ups are done

~RaPiDfIrE~ 11-06-03 08:35 PM

^ if u really want a challenge then I'll battle ya...could be used as a helpful tool for u to elevate...but u should come hard cuz I don't play in battles lol....and if we battle then u set it up n spit first...

as for ur verse...work on ur punchlines...and make em exist...and get rid of the simple rhymescheme...try rhyming bigger words and more of them in each line...

peace

bloodshedd 11-06-03 09:08 PM

forsureeee LOL I'M JUS PUTTING SHIT UP FOR ATTENTION lol... holyy, finally, i've been waiting for a nice battle... ummm u set it up n i'll spit first howz that... we'll see if ma rhymes would meet up to ur expectations in our battle :D lol

.D. CYPHA 11-06-03 09:27 PM

simple punches..you should elevate 1st

~RaPiDfIrE~ 11-07-03 09:35 PM

^ iight I'll set it up w/ rules and whatnot (don't worry I make fair rules)...look out for it in the front lines..

peace

Ken Dawg 11-08-03 11:30 PM

You need to elevate yo..no offense..but those are still amateur rhymes..but it will come over time..keep the work flowing yo..aight peace


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