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.ExXoDuS. 11-06-03 11:51 PM

Unfinished Business (ExXoDuS & MenTiLL)
 
MenTiLL:


Marie ... That was her name So many time I used it in vain
And the pain I gave her so much ... Sheets - Blood stained
I came and went ... But she took it like I was only cheatin'
I was pussy whipped ... Simply speakin - While bein' beatin'
Hungryness often lead to eatin' ... But rarely did it happen
Moanin' and gaspin' ... Action ... Balls and lips started clappin'
Smashin' ... In a sense ... But yes I did tell her I loved her
Usually I was above her ... Too lazy - So she put on the rubber
After I rubbed her ... But a while before me and her combusted
Yes I busted ... In a Trojan - I found out Lifestyles couldn't be trusted
Ketchup and mustard came next ... Yea it was kind of sticky
But at the time I was too broke ... To have the mind to be picky
Get me? Some of you will ... Some won't ... It all depends
I'd tell U more of the story ... If I didn't wake up before the end
But she was my friend ... The girl in my dreams ... Often wore pink lipstick
So the next day I gave her a call and left a message statin' :
"Excuse me miss ... We have some unfinished business"

Time To Switch It Up A Bit.

ExXoDuS:



it started when i was eleven, thought it was heaven, but hell approached//
i was geeky as fuck...gettin beat up...aimin to tell the coach//
but my mellow showed.....and i was easily mispredicted//
and my coach said i was lying, so he quickly dismissed it//
“you didn’t see the marks on my wrist bitch!”..he replied with grabbin my shirt//
his inner demons steadily screamin....”why are you after this jerk”//
"is it because he doesn’t like you.....so you lie and say he fights you”//
“you keep on with these fables and i’ll make it so you need night school”//
“nah i’m cool”.....i jerked from his grasp....then reworded the past//
so it didn’t look as if i was tattered from this jerk hurtin my ass//
3 years went by, constant pain and steady suffering//
duckin, hidin, runnin....anything to avoid another knuckling//
one day i finally snapped.....jerked his spine through his back//
chopped his body up...hackin while i’m laughin...they aint findin this cat//
but before i took his life.........i was puntin the kick in....//
his brain box......and screamed “you fuckin bully...now let’s settle unfinished business//

DoPeYz.

.D. CYPHA 11-06-03 11:59 PM

different, but ok--keep doin ya thang

.ExXoDuS. 11-06-03 11:59 PM

3 Links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90231

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90234

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90224

Eye WitNesS 11-07-03 12:19 AM

Quote:
After I rubbed her ... But a while before me and her combusted
Yes I busted ... In a Trojan - I found out Lifestyles couldn't be trusted

^so true.. Lifestyles break like fuck..

nice lil piece here.. like D. said this is very different from the norm.. but cool cause i like different..

.ExXoDuS. 11-07-03 12:43 AM

Thanx Man. Uppin For Replies.

.ExXoDuS. 11-07-03 12:36 PM

Uppin For Some Feedback Please.

MeNTiLL 11-07-03 01:28 PM

This came out pretty dope Exx ... I liked ur take on the topic ... Thanks for the replies peeps ... Uppin' this for some more feed back ... Peace

anti 11-07-03 01:47 PM

this was koo, unfinished business and such, ha, girl trouble and school days... respect, nice styles from both, mostly a good read too, keep writin'



MeNTiLL 11-07-03 09:44 PM

Uppin again ... Peace

-uski- 11-07-03 09:59 PM

yo nyce aiight i'd give it 7/10 allround an average peice

yo could u check this shit out
Have You Ever Had....

.ExXoDuS. 11-09-03 12:28 AM

Why Do All The Herbs Reply....We Want NO Herb Replies...LMAO


Upping.


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