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Im bored in 4th period and just typin sum shit up...

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Lyrical Soldiers come and fuck up ya crew
D.S. representin... aint nothin new....
Nu Lecture... U need sum1 to protect'cha
Cause tha lyrics I spit is more than a fuckin lect'cha
I aint even focused cause of tha fuckin noise
But I still come and murder u and ur fuckin boyz
Im Sick Wit It Quik Wit It Ima straight up spit it
But if u test me, I'll make ya quit this rap shit
This aint even my fuckin serious spittin
Sounds like sumthin-Touch-My-Buffdoo had ghostwritten
Talk about tha structure cause i know its all jacked
But talk about tha soldiers, ur gonna get whacked
Fuck a whack U'll get merked in serious work
I'll have u workin on tha E channel wit Brooke Burke
Lil Crane went insane in his lil fuckin brain
And Mack_Milli can cry about his fuckin pain
Whitrap is crap when it comes to flows
He has no job, he's lame, and gets no hoes
If a nigga wanna jock sumthin, jock a glock
But make sure that ur woman dont rock my cock
Spit4One went to Spittin 4 none...
Spit son... o thats it?... fuck it man ur done
I'll leave a nigga wet up wit his whole damn crew
Do u know how many niggaz this shell will go through?
Didnt think so... Lyrical Soldiers... Livin up our name
We on sum serious shit as we runnin tha game
While M.B.P. still reppin for tha crew he ride for
P-Verse is reppin for tha whore that a bitch dies for...
Dont take this as a diss, take it as ur fuckin lesson
As I send u niggaz to god witout a fuckin blessin...
LiL Phokus can focus on a lyrical ass whippin
Actin like a thug wit apple juice he be sippin
If I can change tha way u do things, Id make u like him
Cause I dont need a follower... a.k.a. a sim
Be urself and dont respond back to this spit
Cause I piss on ur bars of ur fuckin bullshit...

Uppin for tha feedback on this piece... i know its kinda stupid but i was bored and needed sumthin to write. Peace.

I like the wordplay, but it seemed simple.. Anyways, i guess u have some shit witin you, or u wudn't have "middleweight" as a title. Peace homie.. (not hating)

First of all, being a middle-weight doesnt mean anything. titles mean crap......

Personally I think this is a pretty shitty post. No structure, no flow no multis punches etc.

Nuttin I can really quote.

You'll elevate in time, keep ya head up.

Your replies to others?

i was really bored at tha moment. plus i was in class so i had to do sum quik shit. so yea. thanx for tha replies. uppin for more feedback.

Fuck you, ignore my post. I didn't even have to ask you, I could have deleted it.

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