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Open Mic... Feedback?
Fucka Open Mic Foum Getting Slept On! Condemn Them All To Hell!
Please Read This.. Not A True Story By Any Means But A Lot Of Emotions Came Out Last Night.. Anybody Good With Open Mics Please Reply With Feed And Pointers. This Tells A Very Vivid Story.. Pay Attention To Each Line. Random Thoughts Same Shit Different Day... I Hope I Can Sustain The Rain Tempers Flarin... And Bloods Pumpin Through My Veins Another Comment Made.. More Names Added To My Hit List Just More Jokes Gettin Me On The Verge Of My Wrists Slit Thoughts Swirlin In My Mind... Anger Devours My Mind Write Back Your Death Wish... And Leave It Signed Yours Truly But Whats Worse Truly... Is Nobody Understands Us You Revealed My Secrets... For You I've Lost All Trust As I Approached The Bus.. I Found Out I Was Left In The Dust You Betrayed Me.. My Signs Of Life Are Fading Never Call.. And I'm Drawn To The Conclusion You Hate Me Always There For You.. Remember The First Time You Got Laid B? It Was Shady.. Left Me For That Supposed Lucky Lady... That Hates Me.. And I Bet You Can't Even Remember Her Name Im Goin Insane, Addin Up the Reasons To Leave You In Pain Number One... Hell I Can't Even Begin To Explain Number Two... Your Were The Only Person That Kept Me Sane And Kept Me Sayin.. Today Is Worth Living Instead I Got Worse Living.. And You Brought Out The Pain That Lurks In Me Workin Fifty.. Hours A Week.. Just Goes To Show Ya My Life Has Peaked.. And It Was Nice To Know Ya Or Is It? Considering Never Do You Even Visit... Back In The Days We Was Bros... I Guess You Don't Miss It I Was On The Edge.. Then You Pushed Me Off And Left Me Emotionally Dead Wishin Ya Read This.. You Coulda Saved Me Now You Can't Do Shit I'm Hoping He's Dead.. I Don't Wanna Be The One To Do It I'm Sorry Almost Midnight.. I Knew You'd Be Hangin Out With Friends This Friendships Over... Because Its Too Dirty To Cleanse Shoulda Been There.. But Tonite's The Night That... Your Life Ends Its 1:13.. The Darkness Swallows Me As I Slam The Door Covered In The Shadows.. Not Knowing Whats In Store The Moon Watches Me.. With Suspicion Quickly Arising I Still Can't Find Out Why... I'm The Subject Of Despising I Felt Eyes Upon Me.. So I Walked Over And Got Low I Creeped Across The Grass.. And Opened Up My 73' Bronco I Slowly Began To Drove, Studying My Surrounding; Eyes Peeled Worryin So Much About Him.. I Lost Focus Behind The Wheel Then I Began To Swerve Across The Road.. As I Attemped To Tag The Brake With My Heel Let Out A Faint Squeal, And Flew Through The Windsheild In Critical Condition Landed In The Hospital... Too Many Injuries To Count I May Be Dying.. But Still Nobody Comes Around Thoughts Are Out Of Wack.. Mind's Too Fucked Up To Repair As For My Friend.. He Died In The Accident... But Do I Care? |
Why would you do this?
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off topic but still on
im getting lazy with my feedback now i reply to les but my comments are more in depth i hate when i respond, drop a link and never hear from the person... |
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Booo... Go Kill Yourself! |
I'm not the one that posts Open Mics in R.R.
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thats an open mic...oops
it was another long post i didnt want to read so i just did a vague answer like this ^^ Ha ha thats true |
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0ooo0000oooooo...nice comeback |
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Come Back... Dats An Even Better One For You To Use^... Holla... Your Welcome... -Azaz |
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Bruk... Your Name Is Gay In Itself.. I'm Not Even Sure Why I Am Talkin To You. You Be On My Nuts Like My Fuckin Dickhead. Man Your Almost Worse Than Brixton. Stop Responding Back Here Please.. I Don't Care For Your Posts. |
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LOL GOOD COMEBACK AND IF HE IS SO PHUCKIN WITTY THEN WHY WOULD HE DO THIS LOL |
GOOD ONE DICKHEAD^
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this shit was actually tight...flow was off the hook...I thought you was wack Aisle but I was wrong....
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I Was Never Wack.. But Thanx For The Feedback.
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nice shit man............from the point "your life ends" it was really good....very deep...creative too....nice...
but you should have posted this in emcee iteraction instead of RR maybe |
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Jus more peeps that think aisle is a twat lol...open mics in R.R SUPER CHUMP |
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