Second Beat
 

This is the second beat i made using fruity loops, sounds better than the first, ohcestra style.

Plz critique and giev me some pointers

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/m...ctionsmusic.htm

Ok this is way to simple, to just have the snare in bolth ears and some lil sampled strings or whatever in your left ear will not cut it. You need bout 10 more sound to make a decent beat.
for exsample look at these some are to great but the top one is not realy a beat its a song that i am doing but I did make the beat and did all the production. Its not done cauz its just up there so one of my friends could download it but ill take it down once i have the song done and put up on my song page. But check it out and see what i mean. If you have any quesions IM me and ill do my best Peace.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/odpbeatsmusic.htm