1liner Vs. Tonya~Montana
 

and let the battle begin
10-12 bars
30 min. to post

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I wanna get at you in the worst way/ but you couldn't be gifted with "presence" if you wrote rhymes on ya birthday/ now thats wordplay
i don't need 10 bars to beat you/ just give me one and "like a fat kid" i'd eat you
i'ma cut your rhymes up till they get covererd in gauze/ lyrical saws slice you up till you look like a water fall of menapause
i' mean i'm raw/ disconect you from splean ta jaw/ ans leave your stomach with a mean withdrawl
in this game of name sum are loss/ this kids got the whitest teeth i've ever cum across

not my best but g2g
plus gotta nother battle

hmm..
 

you can JACK-MY-WORDS...cause I'ma FINISH you OFF<>
Nose ALLERGIC to your Fabricated Style...I can SENSE-u-SOFT<>

plenty females on this board...compared to me none Finer//
your rhymes PUSSY...did you take my1 Panty LINER//

you known to spit 1 Liners...but you ain't ILL//
and Lines that you do spit SICK are MIL{mildew}//

you only WASTIN Lines...like ya STOMACH Circumference//
ya ghostwriter did'nt TRAIN you right...where tha BUM went//

yea i'm comin with Punches..and it'll HURT-if-you-Stay//
givin you a DEATH WISH..like GRIM REAPER blowin Candles
on a BIRTHDAY//

let me note....i just finish and did'nt read your verse till afta...but i did'nt verse feed... i see we both mention sumtin bout birthdays...just to let you know...

Flow-1 liner
Punches-1 liner,Tonya came weak....
Metas-1 liners was harder
Humor-1 liners first line....
Vocab-tied

1 liner did the thizzle this time...Tonya might underestimated him...straight battle though...

Hit wit honest votes....Thx..............


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90289

this has got to go to tonya, it was a better structured verse, it had better flow and most importantly it had harder hittin punches.......so.......... vote=tonya....

could you hit this battle plz........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90097

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Tonya took this shit for real,it wasen't even close at all.1liner doesen't even look like he's on level to be able to compete with tonya.His bars were too short,but I can't poll vote..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...1672#post891672
^Drop a vote

thx for showin luv and votin yall!!.
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have to give it to 1liner, but good drop by both yall

1 just came a little harder, but I like both styles

the opener was the clincher

"I wanna get at you in the worst way/ but you couldn't be gifted with "presence" if you wrote rhymes on ya birthday/ now thats wordplay"

vote = 1liner

no beef tonya

drop an honest vote yall

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90294

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Flow-1liner
Punches-1liner
Metas-1liners
Humor-1liner
Vocab-tie
overall-1liner

1liner had complete controll of the battle.. i know montana could of done better than he did..

thanx for the votes yall
much respect to tonya............................................. ..............................

I agree^^^