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replied to set-ignorance, and angellicalR...+ a few more that I can't remember off the dome...I'll put em up in a minute...

I'm bored...so I felt like doin a quick keystyle...lemme know what u think...the topic is just thinkin of the funniest/siccest shit possible

I make more noise than R Kelly in a room full of 14 year old boys//
my rapskills is harder than tryna get the raspy out of lil jon's voice//
I got kat's shakin like sex toys, when I'm rippin n slittin the wrists of these bitches//
fidget when I'm fuckin a midget, pick up the misfit by the bitches armpits n open the clit n stick my dick in it!//
no wonder man, kids don't understand the siccness in my technique//
when u homo's see guys u squirtin white liquid like bitches that breastfeed//
I put on the best scene, like 2 lesbians on stage humpin each other to death G//
raps so hot I could cover em in dog shit and vomit and ya bitch would still find em sexy!//
like sleepy little children you'll find yaself "kid-napped" wake up, get ya shit clapped//
look in the mirror see that ya face is red from the bitchslaps//
u kid's wack, think u got balls, wind up with a slit-sack//
for fuckin with a rapper tighter than a virgins clit-crack//
I'm conversatin with a female that never heard-of-you-while//
I insert my penis in ya girlfriends VERTICLE SMILE!!!!!

lmao....just some off the head kinda shit....

peace

hahahahahahaha lol
funniest verse i've ever seen
but elevate your flow a lil!
7/10
keep droppin, you have potentials

return tha favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89596

this was helleraious but elivate structure

yea that was some funny shit...flow was pretty good, structure could have been better....vocab was good....content was good and made me laugh....overall it was a nice drop....just work on your structure some and you should be set....

oh yea if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89818

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Your length is a little long..you need to give better hits with shorter ryhmes..keep up the good work..peace

^ yea i feel u man that verse wasn't serious at all..I rewrote most of it n turned it into a recorded track today....the flow was off cuz it was written without a beat in like 7 minutes...just a quick key basically...but thanx for the props on the humor n shit...that's basically what I wrote it for was the jokes..I'll hit up ya'lls shit too

peace