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EyE Que Vs 1liner
Iight ten lines, check in before i drop and start keyin it up. We should post around tha same time. So good luck.
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i'ma start gettin personal and use my I_Q
cuz if try to- ----snipe-you --what i'd like-to---is different than what i might -do- i'd advise-you to let the bullets fly-threw--- ya eyes till they roll back and turn sky-blue I'm gunna leave ya mind chewed and and screw her so many times that she'll die 2 my( metafors) have knowcked down (better doors)/ and busted shots at ya turtle neck-ta leave ya sweater torn As for ya MOMS iaint even gunna (let-ter mourne) like i said i'ma fuck her till she die's and (spread her form) no beef dwag peep told me i would win more if i got personal just tryin sumthin diff> nice verse |
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Hit this up ILL be back to vote................. Also peep my battle wit Loke AKA TONYA ITS FUNNY SHIT |
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Ayo...
I know my punches hit hard, but 'one line'? Cmon, that's just 'wiping my nose'/ Your 'prediction didn't work out as planned' like 'white entertainment t.v. shows'/ You need to face reality, you might as well have gave me tha win/ Cuz you wouldn't have a better chance looking through some vets recyclin bin/ I can tell your wack by lookin in your sig, sayin thats some great wordplay/ Fuck a battle, lets have a poll vote on 1liner being tha biggest herb on rb today/ It's a wrap and i aint even throw no punches, your pretty much 'fucked' when i 'lay-text'/ And i'm one of those 'bad luck cases' like 'catchin herpes even wid safe sex'/ God damn, you newbs are hard to resist when your easy to be eaten/ Harder then escaping a 'life sentence' with 'involvment in a police beating'/ First misunderstood person votes i'm going to explain my verse :) ~1~ |
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flow was off on both ends, but iq basically won in ever other categorie, he had much more creavitiy in his verse
.......i cant poll n can only ask u for an honestly peep on me vs ALT besta luck |
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i'd vote but i can't but if i could i would say one liner had it he just had more to i think and it flowed for me at least a whole lot better then again what do i know i'm new to the RB =)
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fgloew/eye
stle/eye vocaab/eye person/eye create/eye vote //eye hit up me amjd 2mindtext >>>>>>>>>>>>.<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
I was on the fence with this one. I would have to go wit a draw. both of yall smashed but noone really ate.
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WHAT??? Lol, all you herbs get out of her. Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Eye came with a better structured and harder hitting punches. What 1liner called personal punches, I call somewhat generic. I mean, he could have been talking about anyone's mom or sister or whoever. Eye used some nice wordplay and metas as well. Very good verse by him, up your wordplay, 1liner. There ya go. Vote here!
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