sustain versus Yaz
 

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| Yaz's punches come low like Populations in Heaven |
| This kids gettin Old, He's right about bein a Legend | (location)
| Yaz? Your name sounds like A German Screamin Yes |
| Ur spits are a Mess, couldnt come clean if u Confessed |
| Ur a fruit, a Fig, Have you scattering like 3 little Pigs |
| Yaz battles wouldnt get peeped unless posted in his Sig |
| Being an Anistetics only way you can Hurt my Feelings |
| Bitch Quotes his lines more than A.C. Apostle Teachings |
| This battles looking in One Direction like Artificial Glass Eyes |
| Couldnt Clap me as a Light system, Yaz's hands must be Tied |

ok umm i didn't agree to this but w/e.... checkin in yo..............................................

sustain???
im sustaind, of makein fun of your name, im not to blame, im just pullin on this dawgs chain, tryna fuck up his brain//
look it's the first line, and i got this bitch in a twine, i fucked up his mind, spittin shit of all kinds//
this is lyrical death, rippin rite through your flesh, manafest and spittin u out cuz of your breath//
u stink so bad, im pritty sure it's not the fad, of wakein up with your dad, and be "g goly glad"//
cum stain on your shirt, your dads a pervert, that shit don't work, unless u werein a skirt//
u trinna act kool like my words arn't fazin ya, your rite mother fucka, it's more like blazin ya//
heatin u up through "hell", listin to the "bell",u can rock like "AC/DC" but your still gonna fail//
your shits the same as always, and it seems likes it's over worked//
Il just finish this now, so i can sustain u from being merked//

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and again uppin(2) for some votes .... don't sleep on this battle i was actualy good on this one...................

flow...sustain
structure...yaz
wordplay...yaz
punches...yaz
openin...sustain
closin...yaz

overal...yaz

no hate sustain...
but my vote goes to yaz

uppin 3 yo... il hit up your battles if u hit up mine.............................................. ................................(includin sig)

yo this sposed to be real fast beat so the flow may seem off if u don't spit fast.... ot slow in the dead like shayd... lol j/p

uh oh............honest

flow-sustain...yazs flow was elementary
metas-sustain
finisher-sustain
punches-yaz had more....the creativity is a diff. story
vocab-sustain

Finisher was good....Yaz gotta getta better structure......if you didn't agree to this then you prolly shouldn't a went...na mean son?

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flow*sustain
structure*sustain
wordplay*yaz
punches*yaz
opening*sustain
closin*yaz
enjoyment*yaz

Vote*YAZ

i couldnt poll vote but plz return tha honest vote plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90810

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uppin (4) yo come on hit this shit up................................................ ................................

iight last uppin HIT THIS DAMN BATTLE UP YO................................................ .................................................. ..............................................