Cancer.. Unfinished
 

ayo heres my FIRST EVER AUDIO :eek:(shocked huh) well im comin back to RB and i jus wana show yall what i been doin in the mean time.. feedback please..... 1


www.soundclick.com/hellevation

umm there is nothing there? thou im sure its good hehe

check it now............ lol

feeeedddbbaaaccckk.................1

OK its not bad but I got 2 thing for you to try. btw your pritty damn good for your age. OK try not to wisper cauz that is what it sounds like and try to eq some more base in your vocals cauz there realy thin. Mabye try downloading a BBE SonicMaximier Pluging and try using that on your vocals. It will help. aight good job thou. Peace

thanks g... will do man.... still uppin for more feback 1

cmon yall.......... gettin lonley haha ~1~

...............feedback PLEASE........................

First thing..u shouldnt up so many times..mods will get angry..n ban u for freeposting...i think ur only sapose to up a song like 3 times...so calm down with all the posts ok...other than that

for ur audio

vocab was ok...flow was ok...emotion ..none really..u need more emotion..ur good for ur age..cuz the voice thing..lol..is a lil soft..but ull grow out of that..but 13 and allready doing a album..lol...crazy kid..but other than that no problems with it

ight thanks man.......... ill try to work harder and ish and get the finished version........ soon

1

ok. vocals are WAY to low. one your flow is ok at times. off at lots of times. hook is off. you sound 11 or 12 your voice hasnt developed yet. so you have alot of elevating coming. try to boost eq on your vocals to about 7k(im guessing you have no idea what that means). overall not bad for someone so young. o yea you need WAY more mic presence. dont rap like your mom is in the other room. RAP LIKE YOUR FACE TO FACE WITH A DEMON.

aight... ill try man lol she is in the other room :( and no.. wtf is 7k? lol

1

Like ya said in my guestbook... beef towards me.... but fuck tha beef. Other than that, U got a lot of elevation to go through lil man. U'll get up there soon. Just keep goin at it until u feel ur at tha level u feel is right to be at. Other than that, stay up.

your 13 right? my lil brother is your age and he can fuck your shit up. but on the real you need some emotion there. but dont try to make your voice sound lower than it is cuz that would sound homo.

um aight...... 1. lil man? lol sall good i guess.... at least you didnt say i suck... and 2. i dont care if yer brother can tear my ass or whatever lol and yeah my voice actually gets higher when i flow so yeah..... 1 thanks for the feedback and still uppin!