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Full Circle * Deep Piece *
Replied To:
Auspicious- The Last War Jay-R- The Mic Life Baron God- Origin Ill Diss: Phrantik . . . The Love Is Here . . . You got me feelin like i'm on cloud nine all the time I'm makin you mine, Realize That Love Ain't Just in Mind I've come to find, that your the Beautiful Girl in my dreams Suitable for me, Coup-able with the right of amount of bling Some say it's for spoils, but the necklace means I Love You The ring means we're together and I place no one Above You I could sing this song forever, knowing that we'll never part Where Should I start? Give you my word or hand over my heart? Either one or both are yours baby, Ya got me actin Crazy Whilin' out, when ya girls say you're my Lady Eye to Eye Connection, love exchanged, No Correction Guide to Happiness in 20 years is through Recollection Your name next to mine, with Love's in the middle Letters signed with names of Lovers and kisses in-um You remember that December when we built this relation -Ship, shit, I had no Patientce and thought I had to be with-her And now my hopes are true, I've Chosen You, Left you Frozen Blue Don't have to worry bout my back, turn round, I know it's you . . . What's Happening Now? . . . Anything you want, I'm bound to get, Found the split Didn't know the validity, Couldn't bare to handle it Was it true, or was my mind decieving me? You recieving things, me feeding dreams Damn, was a stringed together to be ya man ? I just don't understand, I don't feel this when we hold hands I don't feel this when we're next to one another in the sheets Shit, I don't feel this when i'm on the street lookin for Sneaks Are you bookin some creeps?. . . Or do you mean what you say? I come home everyday to Hey and a back rub on the way On the Fridgidaire there's a letter sayin' That I ain't been actin myself lately Me not myself? Ya crazy baby, i've been better than average Ya on ya game, Car for car, like who can match this This can't be the end of us, We gonna find the problem Solve-it, and try not to do shit to start-um-- Up again, Fuck the end, This ain't no Fairy Tale I know you more than Fairly Well but I still can Barely tell What's Happening now? . . . I'll Do Whatever But It's Not Good Enough It's like we've come full circle, never hurt you, never would Wish you understood where I was comin from, The Hood Never really had too many shiny things, only bling was the Bike Reflector Church was my protector, Holy Hymns sing as the Preacher brings Light to the congregation, Facts he statin can't be denied lately He said Love To Those Who Deserve It, Loneliness to those don't Talked to mama, She said don't disown-her, Replied that I won't Like a cowboy with a rope, I'm tryna pull you right back in Nose deep in love again, I can't picture us as friends Quicker I descend, Depression lessens my strength Ya testin my weak, like you chestin me for a weeze Any type of sickness in me, you're lookin for a sign So you can simply state that you're not longer mine You try N aggravate, and I try to contemplate Reasons behind you leadin to an escape It's like you ready to twist it, turn it, leave me for dead Believe what I said that night in bed the trees would've led To the death of me, you best rethink all decisions before they're made Cause I've laid under the stars and now I must lay below the ground babe -Formula. |
nyce peice dawg good shit too read aiight and also its deep and ima feelin ya on that and i respect that aiight Peace (v)
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damn this is long...
1st verse... some of those rhymes were forced...and i mean blantently forced...i like how it started out but it seems like 1/2 way through you started to change how you type 2nd... your flow was hurt on this one...hard read cause it seems like i had to speed up or slow down to keep up with the flow...content was good 3rd... i like how you twisted it like that...the flow fell off near the end... |
very nice peice... very nice... I loved the rhyme scheme you kept...
very dope drop... I cant say much of anything against this... the emo was there and it only added to what was a dope read... Ima look for more of your shit... I like your style... ~AshY~ |
Thanks for the feedback A.T. and Realist. A.T. if ya wanna see more from me, look for Emergency. It's either on the 1st page or the 2nd. Feed for that is appreciated too.
-Formula. |
if ya get a chance... could ya check my open mice called...
All It Takes.... much appreciated, ~AshY~ |
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Uppin this.
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First Off Dawg...
Nice Piece... I Liked How You Flowed In And Out Of Each Bar... The Ryme Scheme Was Real Good... Keep It Up... -P |
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