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PAK N. HEAT vs Nitemarre
5 line/ 10 bars you know all dat.............
No hate, crew, d/r............................ Spit in the next 25 min after you check in........... Lez go dawg............... VOTERS DONT SLEEP, YOU COULD LEARN |
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"X" this cat out.....yo....check
Yo Bitch I Flips Clips Quick-I Fuckin 'Hit' Like 'Major Leagers'|| Ya Style is Meeger, Busta 'Picaso' 'Rearange Yer Features'|| Call ME Yo Teacher, Or Da 'Track Coach', Come N 'Get Ran'|| Make U A Patient Fa 'Amputation' Look Like A 'Veggie Tanned'||* I'm Sendin 'Heat' To Yo 'Bandana' Like 'Mexicans In Da Field'|| It's Real, It Melts A Hole Through ya Pectorial Sheild||* Spreadin Section 'Shots At Ya Grill' Like A 'Sexual Thrill'|| 'Blastin Cavities' Like A 'Dentist Wit 9millimeta' Drills|| I Gotcho Shook Like Im Federal-Come-Get-'Beat'-Like 'Band Drums'|| I'll 'Knock Ya Block Off' Like 'Kids N Legos Havin' Temper Tanrums'|| c'mo boi!!! *gein green *chest For More Of Nitemarres Battles http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90916 |
nice spit can't wait to read pak n heat but ya hit this up w/ a vote i will be back to vote when he spits
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90745 |
yo PAK N.........
Dont tell me you aint gon' battle just cuz a what -Brixton- shited out.......... I aint neva hate on no body............ And It's not like Im one of the newbies, playin around n shit........ So If you aint gon spit............thats filthy, ugh |
^^Uve elevated from our last battle..but u still guna gt koed like last time kid..
MAke sure u understand the personals before voting Ya nitemares make ya pee ya bed.Wut makes u think ya punches been felt// MY Heats stomache turning.So i no history is due to repeat its self// Leave my spits defeatin ya help to the fullest cuz ya raps r mediocore// Got ya sweatin bullets.Cuz beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker// Try an spit a punch i havent said before, This cat got nine lives// An im takin then all wit metaphors that are hard to find// Like ya rap history, u dont belong in the game so quit rap// Im euqipped wit gats,chance of u bein dope is like Micheal jackson actin black// Why do get stuck wit average Cats that dont belong in this rap game// U spits cudnt hit right if u switched a lane, ya spits are lame// Plus its fact if u wanna spit heat u better bruch up fast bitch// Ya spit longer bars to fit more played metas an disses in// |
HMm i came weak...i no ..but its shud be a good battle
different styles an u had a bunch of gay metas ..No personals Prewrite/???? uppin for honest votes................ |
aight...this was a close battle...Nitemarre had some dope wordplay...but it was mostly played...without a doubt it was good...but i've seen it feel me....Pak had some good personals...and punches....but not much wordplay...but what wordplay he did use was pretty dope....
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here's a breakdown for u two... BREAKDOWN Multis - Nite Vocab - Nite Wordplay - Nite (because u had more) Punches - Pak Creativity - Pak Complexity - Tie Personals - Pak RhymeScheme - Pak (personals is what does it) Overall - this is a pretty hard battle to choose from honestly....but i think Pak got it only because he had more ORIGINAL punches...Nitemarre...without a doubt u came good....but ur wordplay was kinda weak....nice battle from the both of u though....good read....no hate....just a vote... peace 4:20 |
yo really hard battle to vote on cuz both were completely different.
Pak/game had more punches, good meta, and personals Nite had better multi's and vocab and little bit better wordplay Both came decent in this i dont know man it all depends on what u want to hear and personally i like punches and personals so i have to give this to Pak cuz punches and personals are what freestyle battles are all about so vote goes to pak and thanx both of u for the votes but pak u forgot to poll vote so here is the link so i can get my win http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90745 |
Multis - Nite
Vocab - pak Wordplay - Nite Punches - Pak Creativity - nite Complexity - Tie Personals - Pak RhymeScheme - Pak Overall - overall...pak barely got it by the skin on his ass..that michael jackson line qwas sicc |
ok nite always hates on the people he battes with and trys to kill them in other battles but ima keep this shit honest iight
flow-nite punchs-pak aka tech(nite make your shit to him not to a random person) structur-nite begginin-tech end-tech(nite like i sed strait to him, not to some random bitch) my vote goin to tech and props to da new name cuz Keep it real cuz Peace (\1/) |
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/\ yeah close battle though i disagree with the others in that you won opener-tie closer-nite because pak's says something about long bars though his bars were longer in this battle...plus it was weak punches-pak...though it was close personals-pak...good ones wordplay-nite creativity-pak vocab-nite sustainment-nite overall more consistent overal-nite but just barely like really really just barely |
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Multies-Nite Structur-Nite Punchs-PAK Personals-Nite Volcab-PAK Opener-Nite Finisher-PAK Wordplay-PAK Enjoyment-both Overall-Nite No hate PAK but i thought Nite Verse was better but it was close real close aiight Peace (v) |
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