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DaJoka 11-11-03 12:47 AM

Verse112 VS DaJoka
 
u knwo the rules...both spit in 20 min after u check in.....

Verse112 11-11-03 12:48 AM

alright
first time so....good luck check in i guess jdsklfjsdlkfklsdf jasdlfjkfdsfdasfd djsklj kjfa fuck this 1oo characters shit

Verse112 11-11-03 12:55 AM

i heard your verse kid that shit is simple and plain/ and i ain't playin you left me with thoughts of distain/ so go train some more before you step to the infinite/ rhymes i got will fuck your ass up like that shit is intimate/ i don't wanna hit you with hard personals cause you might get mad/ think about it you only started rapping when it became a fad/ this is round one but i'll kill you from the start/ went easy on you last time now i got a change of heart/ i did it myself cause i'm surgical with my rhymes/ and you try act like this is the dons first time/ my metas and metaphors are to much for you dome/ gimme the mic back kid and take your ass home/
-Verse-

DaJoka 11-11-03 01:03 AM

cover his fuckin crew wit blood red throats/
shud be charged wit possesion the way he suckin herbs for votes/
yea this transexual got slits but it aighnt in his wrist yet/
pay attention closly back the fuck up cuz this is your first death threat/
quick draw for my gun as im aimin from your head to your gut/
put enough holes in this mutha fucka to play mini put/
are those rap lines nigga? all this nigga packin in bras and purses/
all your lines are shit, atleast your name has decent verses/
now ill lower the heat in here and let u catch your breath/
so close to kilin this bitch hes ajasont to death/

Verse112 11-11-03 01:05 AM

nice good one now we say upin for votes right? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^?

Verse112 11-11-03 01:14 AM

nice structure the ajasont to death thing was killer i can tell you've done this before. it flow as nicely as it could have but over all you killed it.... your a good battle rapper.

DaJoka 11-11-03 04:14 PM

thanx.....uppin................................... .................................................. ................

DaJoka 11-11-03 06:39 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. ............

DaJoka 11-19-03 09:53 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .....................................

Dek81 11-19-03 11:38 PM

Open- dajoka
Metas - none
Creavitity - verse
Personals - dajoka
Flow - tie
Finish - dajoka
Abuse - tie

vote = dajoka

if u can't vote u can still give feed and a free up to others. check my battles.


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